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Unspoken Words / Ungesprochene Worte (Sentanka)

Unspoken words Only some strange thoughts prevail In a drifting mind Illusions of a better world Presence soon becomes future ------------------------------------------ Ungesprochene Worte Nur einige seltsame Gedanken im unruhigen Geist Illusionen einer besseren Welt Gegenwart wird schnell Zukunft

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Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 5/9/2010 5:13:00 PM

Interesting and well written Senryu, Gert. Thought provoking too. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your very nice comments on my poems today and yes I play the piano and teach piano lessons. Indeed music has a power to heal a wounded spirit. Besten wünshe, Caroline.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/9/2010 10:30:00 AM

an enjoyable write, Gert. A thinking poem! Have a great day. Luv, Andrea

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/9/2010 5:38:00 AM

I feel like that as times, strange as you said. Every thought in my mind makes it easier to adjust my next steps, enjoyed the read, have a nice one today,..p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/9/2010 5:04:00 AM

Very true, Gert. In our "drifting minds" we long for that better world. The hopes and dreams carry us through troubled times. Love the way this translation is so easily understood by one who speaks only English. Love, Carolyn

Skat A

Date: 5/8/2010 4:58:00 PM

WORDS UNSPOKEN ARE THE ONES THAT HURT THE MOST, LOVE THE THOUGHT YOU HAVE WRITTEN GERT, thanks for your comment on my Zoo, it was a joke. I can not even believe I wrote it, It was a pleasure to stop and read. I have to celebrate Mothers day tomorrow. Today I will comment extra, have yourself a nice one,,IRMA

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/8/2010 2:58:00 PM

We hope and if we hope maybe we can have faith then maybe these will become reality...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara