Unspoken

Her heart hurts since Penzance
An oft meeting now 'à outrance'
Reckless romance recants 
Forbidden faith’s life dance
Sparked suddenly from slight glance
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2011 at 12:04 AM
oooh, love that last line there, jeff. well, to thank people for comments you just do what you already showed me you can do. Click on their name and tell them so, right here in the box beneath one of their poems. I thank you for YOUR comment. I trust you figured out how to enter this contest then? And do you know how to click on that little soup bowl on a person's name to send them soupmail? that one took ME a while to figure out. Luv, andrea
Mehta Avatar
February 19, 2011 at 5:33 PM
Nice rhyming poem. enjoyed it jeff
Kendrick Avatar
February 19, 2011 at 4:44 PM
Very creative work..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara
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