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Unshakable I once knew a poet named Upma, People laughed as she wrote on karma, Critics inked their dreary wit, She egressed emotive ****, On the go, now tries pen on dharma. Written Feb 25th, 2016 For contest "Sensitive commenting" by Linda

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Date: 3/20/2016 12:45:00 AM
Dr Upma, I can't believe I'm so late reading every entry on the GLASS COMMUNITY contest list. That's very lame of me, :) I was the one who initiated this contest. But, with the moving and all, I asked my sis to close it for me. I like your placement in this contest. :) Congratulations on your awesome Sensitive community Limerick win. --Love Linda--
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Date: 3/16/2016 8:55:00 AM
Great limerick, Upma. Congrats on your win. Janice
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 3/16/2016 10:40:00 AM
Thank you Janice
Date: 3/16/2016 6:40:00 AM
This must be another Upma, for the one I know has a capable pen, not 's..t'!! Writing on dharma makes one contented and happy:) ~ Congratulations on this fine win, Upma:) ~ Regards // paul
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 3/16/2016 8:38:00 AM
Thanks Psul.. U really hv a way with words.. Loved ur comments ..
Date: 3/15/2016 4:03:00 PM
glad to see this one again and wish you congratulations.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 3/16/2016 10:40:00 AM
Thank you Andrea!
Date: 3/14/2016 2:58:00 PM
great limerick Dr Sharma congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 3/16/2016 10:41:00 AM
Thank you Jan
Date: 3/14/2016 10:34:00 AM
Dr Upma, Congratulations on your awesome Limerick win. Stop by my latest blog and drop a smile ;-) Celebrate and enjoy my winning list. **SKAT LOVE**
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 3/16/2016 10:47:00 AM
Thank you dearest .. Appreciate ur continued support..
Date: 3/10/2016 8:54:00 PM
Upma, I sure hope this one wins. Just seeing it again because I can't find a new one of yours to read.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 3/16/2016 10:46:00 AM
Pleasure having ur visits.. U inspired me to write again
Date: 3/9/2016 3:38:00 PM
hahahaha, I got a kick out of your lines 4 and 5.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 3/16/2016 10:45:00 AM
Thank you dear glad u liked
Date: 2/25/2016 9:03:00 AM
:) Good luck in the contest, dear....You writes are anything BUT what you described.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 3/16/2016 10:43:00 AM
True Eileen .. Just got the sake of it ...
Date: 2/25/2016 8:22:00 AM
ok.....u go Doc, I love it!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 3/16/2016 10:43:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 2/25/2016 5:07:00 AM
- I've heard about this poet ........ I think she's talented :) !!! - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 2/25/2016 5:16:00 AM
Oh really .. Thnx for ur kind words dear Anne Lise..