Unshakable

Unshakable 





I once knew a poet named Upma,
People laughed as she wrote on karma,
Critics inked their dreary wit,
She egressed emotive ****,
On the go, now tries pen on dharma.




Written Feb 25th, 2016
For contest "Sensitive commenting" by Linda
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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March 20, 2016 at 12:45 AM
Dr Upma, I can't believe I'm so late reading every entry on the GLASS COMMUNITY contest list. That's very lame of me, :) I was the one who initiated this contest. But, with the moving and all, I asked my sis to close it for me. I like your placement in this contest. :) Congratulations on your awesome Sensitive community Limerick win. --Love Linda--
Canerdy Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 8:55 AM
Great limerick, Upma. Congrats on your win. Janice
A. Sharma Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 10:40 AM
Thank you Janice
Callus Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 6:40 AM
This must be another Upma, for the one I know has a capable pen, not 's..t'!! Writing on dharma makes one contented and happy:) ~ Congratulations on this fine win, Upma:) ~ Regards // paul
A. Sharma Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 8:38 AM
Thanks Psul.. U really hv a way with words.. Loved ur comments ..
Dietrich Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 4:03 PM
glad to see this one again and wish you congratulations.
A. Sharma Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 10:40 AM
Thank you Andrea!
Allison Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 2:58 PM
great limerick Dr Sharma congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
A. Sharma Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 10:41 AM
Thank you Jan
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March 14, 2016 at 10:34 AM
Dr Upma, Congratulations on your awesome Limerick win. Stop by my latest blog and drop a smile ;-) Celebrate and enjoy my winning list. **SKAT LOVE**
A. Sharma Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 10:47 AM
Thank you dearest .. Appreciate ur continued support..
Dietrich Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 8:54 PM
Upma, I sure hope this one wins. Just seeing it again because I can't find a new one of yours to read.
A. Sharma Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 10:46 AM
Pleasure having ur visits.. U inspired me to write again
Dietrich Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 3:38 PM
hahahaha, I got a kick out of your lines 4 and 5.
A. Sharma Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 10:45 AM
Thank you dear glad u liked
Manassian Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 9:03 AM
:) Good luck in the contest, dear....You writes are anything BUT what you described.
A. Sharma Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 10:43 AM
True Eileen .. Just got the sake of it ...
Simpson Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 8:22 AM
ok.....u go Doc, I love it!
A. Sharma Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 10:43 AM
Thank you
Andresen Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 5:07 AM
- I've heard about this poet ........ I think she's talented :) !!! - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
A. Sharma Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 5:16 AM
Oh really .. Thnx for ur kind words dear Anne Lise..
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