Unshackled

Could beliefs be wrong I've survived for too long in a world full of conflicts, wilting nascent innocence-- with venomous fearful experiences.. Broken dreams crawl to breathe inflicted with harsh realities unaware of masked conspiracies in fiery oceans of betrayal, now pound against my sanity floating to silver stars-- they shiver to exist in probabilities.. Diminishing hopes entangled in twisted vague ropes digging deeper in graves of deceased memories with pain, now wander on ghostly roads to bury my doubts in deserts-- they struggle to break free from paranoia.. Banished desires shriveled in cobwebs of perturbed fate drowning me in labyrinths of mourning wails of apathy, now stand valiantly in pain to discard thorns of memories-- they peep to bloom on a sparkling dawn.. Dreams, desires, hopes now faded pages in my book rest in secret dreams when my old soul knocks on doors of crimson agony, raging embers of morose scars fester my wounds in tyranny, blood red scuffles of anguish drench my chapped lips to revive-- buried spears hurled at me.. I've walked an unrelenting journey obliviating desolate scars melting stormy whiplash with exuberant hope of love. I've vowed to discard that fragment tossing my miserable frozen chunks rolling forth with fervent streams on midnight along a canopy to fly afar and find my shore. I've paid my last visit to broken twigs of dissolving fears begging for atonement in mercy swooshing with cushions of dried leaves. I've wiped the wailing stories retreating into resurrection soothing whispers healed my infliction from hurricanes of exile. I'm tired I'm tired I need to move on to disperse afar like dandelion seeds. Unshackled from your anchor my ship in stormy seas releases a victorious incandescence manifested by shimmering strength of the hurt you'd inflicted upon me.. August 6, 2020 INFLICTIONS Poetry Contest Sponsor: Silent One ~Winner: 1st Place

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Date: 8/26/2020 10:06:00 PM
Lines filled with pain ..inflicted with harsh realities unaware of masked conspiracies~ excellent imageries blended with emotions dear Aditi mam.Want you to be strong always:-):-) Congratulations on your top win. Take care.Much love..
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Date: 8/19/2020 3:01:00 PM
Hi Aditi! I thought I had commented on this shining pearl! This is elegant in its expression. Your poetic language and images really shine yet move this along like a flowing stream. Congratulations on your top placement! Sending you blessings and much love...
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Date: 8/19/2020 6:58:00 AM
- Congratulations on your top win in Silent One's contest, Aditi : INFLICTIONS :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/15/2020 1:59:00 PM
Aditi, I think you do a great job of balancing the abstract metaphors ("wilting nascent innocence", "masked conspiracies") with the concrete ones ("cobwebs", "scars", "wounds", "chapped lips"). I find that readers fall along a spectrum of appetite for one or the other and this balance appeals to either. A wonderful top placement for you; I celebrate with you and congratulate you for your significant win. God bless ~ John
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Date: 8/15/2020 9:35:00 AM
A metaphorical explosion of phrases. no doubt that this would win, congrats Aditi on another win, your writing is a breath of fresh air for this site.
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Date: 8/15/2020 6:45:00 AM
Congratulations dear Aditi for your TOP WIN. This poem resonates with me. Magnificent piece!
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Date: 8/15/2020 3:32:00 AM
I feel the anguish and pain in your words.. I like the reference to dandelion seeds and i can relate to the ship reference, I used that in my last poem.. A great piece of emotive poetry.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 8/8/2020 9:17:00 PM
" I've walked an unrelenting journey obliviating desolate scars melting stormy whiplash with exuberant hope of love." so beautifully penned! From start to finish, but that was my favorite part
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