Unsent Letters

Lovingly Yours,
And the letter ended
Followed by my name,
Beside it, a heart is carefully drawn.

The sky spotless clear, the stars are shining brightly.
Coffee in hand, leaning on a cool windowsill.
We are under the same sky, hope you see it too,
While enjoying your tea and cloudless end of day.

A beautiful sunset, a warmth color palette.
Migratory birds adding texture to my view,
Maybe I can paint it for you, a masterpiece.
Just another day I would want to spend with you.

If I can grab your hand and pull you beside me.
Today, the ocean's so calm, a peaceful morning.
Salt breeze on our hair, bare feet touching the waves.
It's a longing, to do it together with you.

Every blissful time I have had, I think of you
All is written, signed and sealed.
But I'm weak, to ever know your response.
All the time, it goes to the drawer, the keeper of secrets.

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Date: 12/11/2024 9:49:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, Kabayan... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Charmane Bellen
Date: 1/27/2025 1:49:00 AM
Thank you Kabayan Beata! God Bless.
Date: 10/6/2024 1:26:00 AM
Dear charmane, this is so evocative and sounds so sincere and genuine how you’ve expressed so many emotions in your poem. I especially felt the lines “ Every blissful time I have had, I think of you All is written, signed and sealed.” sometimes despite all we still think of that one person, when in good or bad times, and we hesitate to know their response, as life has taught us disappointments. I love how descriptive this is too! Pleasure reading! Thank you for sharing! Congratulations on your win
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Charmane Bellen
Date: 10/7/2024 9:15:00 AM
OMG! Thank you so much for the appreciation. I really appreciate it. Hugs!!
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