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A mirror is merely A reflection of ones self You can't discern what's deep inside That's shown to no one else You can't see the broken heart Of a mother who lost her child Who blames herself for giving up And sending to the wild You can't see the damaged soul Of a girl matured too fast Who's innocence was torn away By a demon of her past You can't see the throbbing pains Of a boy next to his dad Who can't let go Who's fading slow Still words are left unsaid A mirror merely shows What's apparent to the eyes You can't discern the agony The reason why one cries

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/27/2009 11:40:00 AM
Brilliant poem Cassundra>>James
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Date: 3/22/2009 3:03:00 PM
Verses 1,2,3,5 are excellent work on getting the meaning into 4 lines with the 2nd & 4th line rhyming as you did in the others. Light & Love and welcome!!!
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Date: 2/27/2009 6:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. May you have many more featured. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/25/2009 6:27:00 PM
Cassaundra - wonderful every time i read it I like it more - Thats the mark of excellence - I just want to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/23/2009 11:38:00 PM
This is a sad write but so true. Congratulations on being featured it is well deserved. Your words flow easily and freely.
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Date: 2/23/2009 3:00:00 PM
So much truth in your words, which are reality for far too many. Congratulations on having you poem featured this week. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 2/23/2009 1:09:00 PM
Very true and a very nice poem. For me poems work much better as soul mirrors. After I write one I just sit and stare at it wondering what part of me I can see reflected back through the words.
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Date: 2/23/2009 9:33:00 AM
Congrats on "Unseen" being featured, Cassaundra. Vince
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Date: 12/28/2008 10:13:00 AM
Cassaundra - Welcome to Poetry Soup! Wishing you a Happy and Joyous New Year! Peace always, John
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Date: 12/25/2008 2:21:00 PM
Cassaundra - I just wanted to stop by and welcome you to the Soup – Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ
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Date: 12/17/2008 6:39:00 PM
Awesome poem!
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