Unseaworthy

Unseaworthy

I creak like an old ferry 
coming in to meet the wharf
mindful of less agile passengers

but like a wayward skiff
my thoughts soon override the pier
bounce against its rails, veer off

impatient with each lurch and bump
engines churn, make the waters flounce
I want to glide, admire my wake

I’m taking longer at drydock 
and can’t maintain this tight routine
too many layers patch my hull 

beneath the waterline, barnacles itch
and I can feel those worms at work 
I’m eager for an obscure berth.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Christian Avatar
February 25, 2025 at 1:21 AM
well done on your featured poem. thanks for sharing
Radice Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 8:33 AM
Very clever Michele. Age slows us down over time that's for sure but I doubt you are all at sea just yet - not with expert writing like this. :) Cheers - Gary
Blake Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 8:21 AM
I think this works very well, Michele, with some clever imagery. Also enjoyed reading your other pieces.
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