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Unseaworthy

Unseaworthy I creak like an old ferry coming in to meet the wharf mindful of less agile passengers but like a wayward skiff my thoughts soon override the pier bounce against its rails, veer off impatient with each lurch and bump engines churn, make the waters flounce I want to glide, admire my wake I’m taking longer at drydock and can’t maintain this tight routine too many layers patch my hull beneath the waterline, barnacles itch and I can feel those worms at work I’m eager for an obscure berth.

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Date: 2/25/2025 1:21:00 AM
well done on your featured poem. thanks for sharing
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Date: 6/29/2024 8:33:00 AM
Very clever Michele. Age slows us down over time that's for sure but I doubt you are all at sea just yet - not with expert writing like this. :) Cheers - Gary
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Date: 5/30/2024 8:21:00 AM
I think this works very well, Michele, with some clever imagery. Also enjoyed reading your other pieces.
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