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I was on a high
riding on a sunray
feeling the love

That seemed to bother you
so you had to go on the attack 
making a point to deflate my balloon

It annoyed you terribly
that I might be happy
you had to spew your venom 

I have news for you
I’m out of harm’s way
you cannot spit far enough



AP: Honorable Mention 2025

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Date: 6/27/2025 2:11:00 PM
Well described and well written Line.
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Date: 6/27/2025 3:41:00 PM
Thanks, Tahira ~

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