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UNSANG SONG

Unsang song To the body that buried crying souls turbulence is emotional Womb for a wormhole life is optional, One night stand for stars die quicker than supernovae and wrapped in Mummifying sheets .thighs for dear dairy to hold record of men who came for visit. The same thighs measure a how deep is the cut to the fetus should be. No tiny hands or feet for lullaby songs. back door clinics welcome unwanted life for the cost of living give life no meaning. pillow talks to seek a place under the skin where lust resides, for what reason should a latex determine the fate of responsibility? rough talks heat of pleasure where demons dance for the sad tune of reality. palms rough like surfaces of hard rocks, tin men walking around with empty chests, when prides are sold over the counter for a one night stand. Friday afternoons are used for slaughter, on the fourth termination, count increases every fortnight, body heavy with smell of death around the waist like a waste site. who smells the coffee when waters keep breaking for pleasure? by:TSHEDISO SEROKI

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Date: 10/11/2016 11:28:00 AM
It is very interesting and creative. Gives another way of looking at the world.I also like writing couplets and sonnets. I am not that perfect but feel free to read my poems and comment.
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Date: 9/20/2016 1:35:00 PM
Tshediso, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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TSHEDISO LOUW
Date: 9/21/2016 3:16:00 AM
poet destroyer you are more than welcome and i will check the contest page. check all my poems and reply and comment
Date: 9/19/2016 9:31:00 PM
TSHEDISO LOUW, Georgie, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Cyndi MacMillan
Date: 9/20/2016 8:18:00 AM
Skat. Not sure you know, but you keep calling everyone Georgie ...
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TSHEDISO LOUW
Date: 9/20/2016 1:38:00 AM
Skat im very humbled to be here so that i can share my soul to the world
Date: 9/19/2016 3:44:00 PM
Sad and true... but I refuse to judge and only feel great sorrow for all who face these circumstances and must live with their choices. Your lines are well written and some shook me, as they should. Thank you for sharing this controversial piece with Soupers. You may receive both positive and negative feedback when abortion is the subject. However, isn't that part of what it is to be a poet? We write because we must write and damn the consequences. Welcome to Soup. Keep posting!
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TSHEDISO LOUW
Date: 9/20/2016 8:12:00 AM
I AM GOING TO BE EARN MY PLACE IN THE SOUP FAMILY
Date: 9/19/2016 11:03:00 AM
Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much.Very meaningful & deep write. Keep on writing..........//:) with love
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TSHEDISO LOUW
Date: 9/20/2016 8:14:00 AM
GRATITUDE SIR