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Unruffled

Wind rushes through me
Blowing everything around--
Still I stand firmly

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Sneha Rv

Date: 4/19/2016 12:56:00 PM

This is fantastic!! :) :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/23/2013 12:52:00 PM

Oh BOY I have found my little monkey! Mama monkey is so happy! BIGGEST smooches! Light & Love

Jack Horne

Date: 4/18/2012 12:45:00 PM

lovely write, nikko - glad it was a winner - thought i'd read your first ever post (now that i know how to)

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/12/2012 4:44:00 PM

Hi nikko, just taking in your first here on soup, not disappointed, wonderful Haiku. harry

Jodie Williams

Date: 6/2/2011 4:43:00 AM

congratulations on your win :)

Skat A

Date: 6/2/2011 12:44:00 AM

grats on your awesome contest entry Luv*Skat

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/1/2011 12:21:00 PM

Oh my word!! Did I comment on this one? I can't remember.. Just so you know I absolutely love this Missy! The last line is just so powerful.. Congratulations to you ;) *mwahugs*

Gautami Phookan

Date: 6/1/2011 11:59:00 AM

What a beauty!! very thoughtful and deep,, loved this first poem on soup nikko..Congrats on your awesome win. love, gautami

Jack Horne

Date: 6/1/2011 8:03:00 AM

Many congrats, Nikko : )

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/1/2011 7:43:00 AM

For a little senryu....this has a lot of power! I am glad you are a girl who can stand against the wind....strong, committed, and can hold your own!! Yahoo!!

Ralph Taylor

Date: 6/1/2011 7:15:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Nikko. Excellent. Ralph

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/1/2011 7:00:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d., nikko

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/1/2011 5:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in P.D.'s contest Nikko. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/31/2011 11:13:00 PM

okay,,, had to do my congrats in style...lol... you know me... I'm not reading poem 3 times.. so i have a nice one for all my 70 winners..lol... i got to do yesterdays tooo... anyways. I feel bad now Nikko, now... i must not be a good friend... :-( I'm gonna check if i have commented on your first poem,, if not shame on me.. I enjoyed this one very much... really you know how sassy i am... take care,..p.d.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 5/31/2011 11:30:00 PM

haha! Oh you're back in Texas now? ok I got all befuddled there-- yup I am you and you are me that's why you just called me Chris! O_0 haha! But you got me wrong, I am actually Andrea, oh wait, wait I mean I am Irma pretending to be Sydney pretending to be pd pretending to be a mouse who is really a cat who is really a fox-- lol!

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 5/31/2011 11:22:00 PM

okay one more comment... okay... we don't want anyone to know who is who...lol... bye Chris read you later

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 5/31/2011 11:20:00 PM

wait.. wait one more comment... its a good thing i did not know this poem was yours..i would have gave you.. #1...lol... because you know you are me and i am you... right Irma...

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 5/31/2011 11:18:00 PM

and don't think i'm going all, C.D.A., on you... lol... i'm just ready to hit the groung in 6 hours..lol.. last comment I promise... unless you post a new one,..p.d.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/31/2011 11:07:00 PM

NIKKO~ CONGRATULATIONS!! In my contest, and thank you for supporting my contest. I had a great time reading and judging every entry in my contest. Thanks for being among all my chosen winners. have a great one,.. Poet D.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 5/31/2011 11:27:00 PM

okidoki hahaha this reply thing is really sorta fun... are you coming back to read this, I wonder?

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 5/31/2011 11:08:00 PM

hld on ..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/31/2011 11:05:00 PM

wow! wow! Nikko... are you a palm tree... buzz... times up... lol./... hold on i'll be right back,,,

Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 5/31/2011 11:26:00 PM

oh! haha I only clicked on my poem just now and didn't see these replies-- hahaha ok I will be mad on the count of 3: 1..2...3..-GRRRRrrrrrr-! ;P!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 5/31/2011 11:26:00 PM

hahahaha yeah right! you know I am not mad at you-- oh boohoo you never checked my first post! But eep! I don't think I ever read your first post here either? or have I? lemme go check after this heehee

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 5/31/2011 11:16:00 PM

oooo,,, i am bad friend... I never stopped to read your first poem,,, shame on me... well if you don't want to be my poet friend from another island for 2 days that is okay... I'll be sleeping anyways...lol... oi... i think i need to go night night... and kidding about the friend thing... you can only be mad for 3 hours..lol.. take care,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/31/2011 9:26:00 PM

congrats Nikko on a wonderful win in this contest with these fantastic words luv..enjoy..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/31/2011 8:31:00 PM

Nikko, I really am happy to see this at the top. Very deserved win, my friend. Congratulations to you.

De R

Date: 5/7/2011 8:46:00 AM

So this is your first poem, huh? Great meaning behind this..this demonstrates that you are a strong person. Wonderful senryu..:) It would look more powerful to me without the 'still' in the last line 'Wind rushes through me Blowing everything around-- I stand firmly` -like this. Hope you don't mind me saying that, just my opinion. Anyway, great message here. I will continue reading one poem a day till I finish them all. :D Have a great week-end, sweetie:* Hugs, Emilia:)

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/4/2011 1:42:00 PM

Sneaked back to read your first entry into soup... and I amazed by your talent and a strong women behind these words.. Hope your week went well and missed reading your poetry....luv Michael

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/4/2010 1:09:00 PM

Wow! I love this one :) btw I had to alter that "hot summer's night" :) you made me laugh with you comment, tc sleeping beauty hehe

Daver Austin

Date: 6/4/2010 4:10:00 PM

Good classic type Haiku. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/4/2010 12:10:00 PM

Congrats Nikko on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. wonderful words to share with us all.. luv.. Linda-Marie.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/1/2010 12:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Nikko. May you have many more. Love, Carol