Notes About The Poem

unresponsive in the garden

I walked in the garden
yeah, that was me
I stepped on a plant
accidentally.

In my defense it was gloomy,  
there was no moon
I would have missed it
if it had been noon

I’m afraid it was fatal
you’re the first with the results
it was limp and unresponsive
and it had no pulse

I decided I’d bury it - it was gone.
I’d do it after jogging, about dawn
I thought it improvident and beyond needs,
it turned out fine - it recovered - it’s a weed..
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Songs for this:
A Girl In Trouble (Is a Temporary Thing) by Romeo Void
Can't Be Sure by The Sundays
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Fallica Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 9:59 AM
<3 . Delightful :-)
Vionet Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 10:07 AM
We're heavy into diagnostics these days (unresponsive and no pulse). =]
Sidwell Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 9:22 AM
Lol, great humor and writing throughout!
Vionet Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 10:07 AM
Thank you!
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