Robert Gorelick Poet Limerick

Unrequited Valentine Passion Collab

A love potion meant for her high school beau
She mistakenly spilled in my Latte to-go
With my passions on fire
When I expressed my desire
She replied "You're a bit too old, Romeo"
                                                      by Robert Gorelick

Tell her when you see her your not too old  
That the fire in your soul never goes cold  
And you don’t need potion
For showing emotion
As your passion is remotely controlled
                                                      by Belle Bellevue

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Anselmo Boles February 7, 2023 at 10:21 PM Hahaha, what a blast. You 2, are the two most precious items offered in a gourmet menu; and not to-go! Bravo! Cheerio...anselmo Robert Gorelick February 9, 2023 at 7:07 PM Absolutely two peas fin a Valentines pod!

Michael Tor February 6, 2023 at 7:49 PM Now if you can market that Potion you can revive marriages and put a smile on everyone's face. Your only as old as you feel they say. The comical side of you is alive and young and well, lol...rt4 Robert Gorelick October 7, 2024 at 9:35 AM Thank you, Michael, please excuse the belated reply. Missed this one! Robert

Beryl Edmonds February 6, 2023 at 6:40 PM Tell her when you see her your not too old - That the fire in your soul never goes cold - And you don’t need potion - For showing emotion - As your passion is remotely controlled. Robert Gorelick February 9, 2023 at 7:05 PM Always pleased to have my Limericks skillfully and cleverly augmented. Beryl Edmonds February 8, 2023 at 1:49 PM Thanks for the add-on Robert… Belle