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Unrequited Love

Eyes, Gateways to the soul When I look into hers I see pools of blue divine moonlight She looks back My heart skips a beat Her warm embrace makes my soul quiver with joy She says I love you, I say it back She means it but not in the way I want it She looks back at me with her angelic allure I try to tell her how I yearn No words could do it No actions could show it ...I can’t do it I find myself at the precipice of heartbreak The clear path is lost to me In the distance I see the golden haired angel Growing ever closer, yet increasingly further I don’t think I can live without you And I know that I never will...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/28/2016 10:46:00 AM
cameron, A great pleasure to find and read your poem today. Love ** SKAT **
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Date: 2/10/2010 6:13:00 AM
this is a nice poem sad and heartfelt but thats what makes a good write.
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Date: 2/10/2010 3:23:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Cameron. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/9/2010 8:16:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. please continue to share your creative writes with us all .. as this delight tonight.. enjoyed your unrequited love.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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Date: 2/9/2010 7:18:00 PM
welcome to the soup.....smile!
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Date: 2/9/2010 6:41:00 PM
the truth hurts. but it's better facing it than letting it lie. john
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