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Unrequited Love

i emptied the desert looking for sand ~ one fine grain slipped through my hand


I See Love Poetry contest 
Syllable counter PS. (17)
22/07/21

Judged 17/08/21 N/A

August 2021 NA's Poetry Contest
By Constance La France

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Constance La France

September 2, 2021 at 1:51 PM

David, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my contest ~ peace and tranquility _ Constance

David Kavanagh

September 2, 2021 at 1:55 PM

Thank you Constance, you give me hope, cheers David

Christuraj Alex

August 30, 2021 at 9:03 AM

Beautiful Monoku. Congratulations!

David Kavanagh

August 30, 2021 at 11:39 AM

Heya Alex, all the better second time round, cheers David

Kai Michael Neumann

July 24, 2021 at 4:52 AM

That is very powerful ...

David Kavanagh

July 24, 2021 at 6:04 AM

Thank you Kai, a desert full of unrequited love, where does one start, cheers David

Andrea Dietrich

July 22, 2021 at 3:57 PM

wow, it may be one like, but it ROCKS!!!

David Kavanagh

July 22, 2021 at 4:10 PM

And indeed Andrea it’s that one elusive grain, can make all the difference, cheers David

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 22, 2021 at 2:47 PM

- Wooow, David ... only one word ... excellent :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

David Kavanagh

July 22, 2021 at 2:54 PM

Thank you Anne Lise, I really would love to empty the Sahara for some reason, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty

July 22, 2021 at 12:41 PM

I emptied the desert looking for sand What can i say David Apart from respect salute Next lever to the reader who has the intellect and ability to contemplate The depth and meaning in what you wrote Philosophically Greek Absolutely love this my mate

David Kavanagh

July 22, 2021 at 1:36 PM

As you know Christopher, this soup has many diverse flavours, it’s all about what’s in the eye of the beholder at any given time, but your comment alone makes it worth the while,

Christopher Flaherty

July 22, 2021 at 1:19 PM

Totally and Utterly. My only hope is David i am not the only 1 and far more like minded brethren are to pass comment. Because if this is not deserving of soul searching. Then what is

David Kavanagh

July 22, 2021 at 12:57 PM

I had a feeling you would totally get this one Christopher, When something is missing in our lives no matter how much we try, it cannot be forced or made happen, probably because it doesn’t exist in that moment, thank you so much for that kind comment, cheers David

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