Unrequited Love

If only I could have told you how I really 
felt.

You are my best friend and I loved being
around you.

You’re the one I called on when I had a 
bad day.

On many occasions when my family
were fighting, you were there.

You were my rainbow after a very bad 
storm.

I found comfort in your loving arms.

You me made feel special when it felt as 
though, the world said I was no good.


I was vulnerable around you, I showed you
my ugly truth, and you didn’t even flinch.

I never understood why you said, my
scars were beauty marks.

I still remember your eyes, they’re loving 
and kind.
I still remember your dimples, they’re mes-
merizing. 
I still recall your voice, it’s like music to my 
ears.
I still recall your scent, it’s the best aroma 
ever.


There’s no way you could have known
how I felt, I was to afraid to tell you.
You’re an amazing friend and confidant 
and I couldn’t bare to lose you.


If Only You Knew…. I was madly in love
with you,

What would you have done?

We’ll never know because now you’re 
married with a family of your own.


Not a day that goes by that I don’t 
think about what could have been.


If only you knew……. my darling 
that I’m still in love with you.






10/22/2020
Sponsor: Silent One
Contest: If Only You Knew
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 10/27/2020 3:34:00 PM
I love the words, "You were my rainbow after a very bad storm." The 'what ifs' are bittersweet, with the sweet memories along with the regrets. Nice song to accompany the reading. I agree that scars are beauty marks for they speak to the power to overcome adversity as well as being markings unique to that individual. When we own our scars we own our deepest self, and a person who can do that is beautiful indeed. Congrats on your high placement, Alexis!
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Date: 10/27/2020 1:13:00 PM
This touches my heart deeply, Alexis. Probably many of us have been through similar experiences, and it can be tough...that "if" will never be answered. Congratulations on pacing second. Regards // paul
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Date: 10/27/2020 8:33:00 AM
- Heartbreaking poem - Congratulations on your win, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/26/2020 9:24:00 PM
Congratulation on your win .Wish you all the best
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Date: 10/26/2020 9:04:00 PM
Back with a big congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/26/2020 8:12:00 PM
Straight from the heart! Beautiful! Congrats!!
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Date: 10/26/2020 8:10:00 PM
What a heartfelt write Lexi, I'm sure most can relate to this, congrats on a nice win, it's great to see you entering and winning in contests, see I told you you can do it!
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Date: 10/26/2020 5:43:00 PM
Congratulations, Alexis, on your win. It is a heartfelt poem, loved it.
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Date: 10/26/2020 5:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 10/26/2020 3:09:00 PM
Alexis, a sad but beautiful poem/story, you never forget someone you love, past love stays a part of us, forever. Congratulations this so deserved the win. . . Belle
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Date: 10/26/2020 2:59:00 PM
Congrats Alexis! This is so sweet. I enjoyed reading it and this sort of thing probably happens so often. God bless you
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Date: 10/26/2020 11:17:00 AM
Congratulations, Alexis, on your great win in this contest for your lovely, emotional piece!!
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Date: 10/26/2020 9:07:00 AM
Maybe he did know, but he knew he could not do anything about... Great poem for this contest.. Congratulations on your placement..
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Date: 10/26/2020 1:03:00 PM
Hi Silent, You hosted a good contest. I appreciate my placement. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
Date: 10/23/2020 2:31:00 PM
You have reached into quite a number of hearts with this one! Good luck in the contest! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 10/23/2020 1:30:00 AM
Deep emotions. Unfortunately the prize will never be won. Best for a win. You deserve it. ~~
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Date: 10/22/2020 8:24:00 PM
This engrossing poem is so beautifully written. I also love the song. Best of wishes for the contest. :)
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Date: 10/22/2020 7:07:00 PM
Awe, those times that meant a lot , but to scarred to say anything. It is hard sometimes, you don't want to be rejected. Perfect write for Silent One's contest. Good luck my friend. Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/22/2020 3:01:00 PM
WOW! Just the right theme for this contest. Wonderfully emotive, Alexis.
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