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Unreleased With Management

Power is dynamite Power is unleased Unleased for evil Unleased for good Good brings joy Good brings love Love is of God Love releases Releases happiness Releases freedom Freedom to live Freedom to be responsible Responsible in relationship Responsible in life Life opens doors Life for living Living is a joy Living each moment Moment slowly make minutes Moment do make hours Hours to use gifts Hours to understand Understand oneself Understand others Others are important Others make secure Secure in life Secure in all All aspects All that's worthy Worthy ideas Worthy duty Duty of motherhood Duty of home Home is where the hearth warms Home fills the heart Heart filled with good Heart filled with sympathy Sympathy for situations Sympathy for one's position Position of underling Position of powerlessness Powerlessness at home Powerlessness in business Business of the world Business of management Management unrequited Management of strength Strength Unrequited
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Smith Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 10:31 AM
A poem that needed to see the light of day. Thanks for bring it to light Sara and for making it your task and not falling short. Not easy to keep the flow right in a poem of this length. You have the power of concentration which not many now possess. Regards David in NZ
Kendrick Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 2:19 PM
Thank you, David from New Zealand. I appreciate the visit and taking time to comment. Sara K
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February 19, 2024 at 10:46 AM
Dear Sara, this poem resonates with a sense of depth and thoughtfulness. I am truly moved by the profound and meaningful impact it holds. It is undeniably powerful and many lines within it stood out to me, particularly the portrayal of both powerlessness and the immense strength of love. Your brilliance continues to shine through in your writing.
Kendrick Avatar
February 19, 2024 at 12:05 PM
Thank you, Lasaad. Your visit adds a special touch. Sara K
Empress Avatar
February 18, 2024 at 1:05 PM
I love the shape this blitz created and how deeply profound and meaningful it is! Powerful really! So many lines stood out for me the powerlessness and the power of also love so well depicted and delivered! Brilliant as always dear sara. Pleasure reading your work. Sending you light always
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February 19, 2024 at 6:39 AM
I appreciate the high praise, IE. It is hard to believe how in this day and age we still have situations where a person is powerless and another person who has all the power and control. It puts a person in a terrible position and possibly puts two people in a terrible position. Sara K
One Avatar
February 18, 2024 at 12:35 PM
I see you are carrying on with the blitz.. this one is nicely done.. nice arrangement of words and flow..
Kendrick Avatar
February 19, 2024 at 6:33 AM
Thank you, SO. I needed to write and I started with something then it flowed. Thanks for the kind review. Sara K
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February 18, 2024 at 10:12 AM
Nice thoughts, thank you for sharing :)
Kendrick Avatar
February 18, 2024 at 10:30 AM
Why, thank you, Edward. The smile is so nice. Sara K
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February 18, 2024 at 9:47 AM
Not my favorite form of poetry, but you did it so well. Best for a win.
Kendrick Avatar
February 18, 2024 at 10:29 AM
Oh, it is not for a contest, Victor. I just wrote it. It did not go the way I wanted it to go but there it is. LOL..Thanks for stopping by ...Sara K
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