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Unrecognizable Rhythm

midnight's descend clothed me in darkness, stilling the process of you giving up on us but it was useless when dawn's ascend stripped me naked with a vengeance that ache-quaked my being   it's no longer there your... sugary, salty taste that clung to my tongue long after our orgasms sprung   imprints of your fingertips were fading fast from my skin   survival instinct kicked in summoning daydreams to pull down my eyelids and project memorable moments with you but souldeep your absence persistently abuse my senses the words, {{YOU'RE. GONE. FOR. GOOD.}} beat against my eardrums resounding thoughts of your scent, I'll never take in again or feel the heat of your kiss on my lips   each footstep taken, led you away trampling my heart into an unrecognizable rhythm from the way it used to beat for only you   I feel the slowing of your love flow through my veins and hear the weakening beeps I know our flat line is just a matter of time... love's death is near and I don't know rather to let us rest in peace or do my best and try to resurrect us.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/6/2016 8:33:00 AM
When uncertainty is fresh, all traces linger. Such precise word choice opened up the readers' senses to those traces. Should she mend or does it end? Fabulous write, a 7! Welcome to Poetry Soup!
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Corey Johnson
Date: 4/6/2016 10:01:00 AM
Good Morning Dineen, It means a great deal when someone likes or enjoys my poem, but when someone feels my poem... it's the sweetest reward for this poet! Thank you for your time and Welcoming! Corey
Date: 4/6/2016 1:23:00 AM
Corey, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Corey Johnson
Date: 4/6/2016 9:53:00 AM
Hey there Poet, Anything associated with poetry I will enjoy. Even more so in a friendly and supportive environment. I definitely plan to stop by and take in some of your art and be sure to check out the contest page, as well as other forums in the community. Thank you so much for the warm welcome! Corey

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