Unreal

Like roses on a thorn I never knew
 What I thought was beneath and what was there
 I look inside and all I see is you
 And there I found I actually do care
 More than I deserve, you make me feel
 Am I awake? Or is this just a dream?
 Heart Beats, with a tear and my thoughts unreal
 Perhaps this world is more that what it seems;
 I hope someday you'll see what I see
 Away with your pity and no more sighs
 You'll look inside and tomorrow we will fly
 You'll change and the sky will darken its hue
 Whatever you become I will still love you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 5/17/2016 12:13:00 AM
Clare Doyle, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
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Date: 5/14/2016 3:22:00 PM
CLARE D, Fantastic writing, glad to read your poem. ~Love LINDA~
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Date: 10/17/2012 7:03:00 AM
Whoa! Now that's what's known as unconditional love. I love your illustration of the rose. When you're pricked by thorns from a rose flower, it's easy to ignore its beauty -it's just like a mud covered precious stone, the beauty still remains. To remind ourselves of that and to remind others is what true friendship is all about. Nicely said Clare!
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