Unreal

Like roses on a thorn I never knew What I thought was beneath and what was there I look inside and all I see is you And there I found I actually do care More than I deserve, you make me feel Am I awake? Or is this just a dream? Heart Beats, with a tear and my thoughts unreal Perhaps this world is more that what it seems; I hope someday you'll see what I see Away with your pity and no more sighs You'll look inside and tomorrow we will fly You'll change and the sky will darken its hue Whatever you become I will still love you

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Skat A

Date: 5/17/2016 12:13:00 AM

Clare Doyle, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/14/2016 3:22:00 PM

CLARE D, Fantastic writing, glad to read your poem. ~Love LINDA~

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 10/17/2012 7:03:00 AM

Whoa! Now that's what's known as unconditional love. I love your illustration of the rose. When you're pricked by thorns from a rose flower, it's easy to ignore its beauty -it's just like a mud covered precious stone, the beauty still remains. To remind ourselves of that and to remind others is what true friendship is all about. Nicely said Clare!