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Unravelment Undulates Us,Fully Forging Foundation, Out of Obeisance

Undone by a forgotten dream Fell into your eyes and began divulging things Out from between my lips, my thoughts streamed Underneath my memories of you entangling me Fragmented scenes of dreams found an opening Overwhelming intuitions of who you used to be Unglued by the truths that I could not know Frightened that your secrets are now set aglow Overcome with the shame of of being stripped and shown Undertow drags us somewhere distilled and clear Forming a net and pulling you near Open and truly tender, our fragile hearts advocate here Unfolding before me, you so purely unconcealed Fluid vulnerabilities tear my heart open for you to feel Only you, in my eyes, my paramour revealed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/10/2016 1:45:00 AM
Elle, nice to see this one again. xox. LINDA
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Date: 7/7/2015 1:08:00 PM
:)
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Date: 4/19/2013 10:20:00 PM
Elle , "Welcome to the poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I'm stopping by to invite you on over to my latest contest --called the “7 wonders” I'm hoping you will consider the enjoyment and challenges we offer in our contest. If you like, please consider my contest. You can find the contest page on the top left hand side. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems in the future. Today I will start by reading all you have posted this far..... Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"
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Date: 4/19/2013 9:16:00 AM
Elle :-), Wishing you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it.. Luv~*~SKAT"
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Date: 4/19/2013 8:52:00 AM
Beautiful ! You have a wonderful way with expressive words. Well done & welcome to P/Soup xx
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