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Unravelment Undulates Us,Fully Forging Foundation, Out of Obeisance

Undone by a forgotten dream
 Fell into your eyes and began divulging things
  Out from between my lips, my thoughts streamed
Underneath my memories of you entangling me
 Fragmented scenes of dreams found an opening
  Overwhelming intuitions of who you used to be
Unglued by the truths that I could not know
 Frightened that your secrets are now set aglow 
  Overcome with the shame of of being stripped and shown
Undertow drags us somewhere distilled and clear
 Forming a net and pulling you near
  Open and truly tender, our fragile hearts advocate here
Unfolding before me, you so purely unconcealed 
 Fluid vulnerabilities tear my heart open for you to feel
  Only you, in my eyes, my paramour revealed

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Poet Destroyer A

March 10, 2016 at 1:45 AM

Elle, nice to see this one again. xox. LINDA

Skat A

July 7, 2015 at 1:08 PM

Poet Destroyer A

April 19, 2013 at 10:20 PM

Elle , "Welcome to the poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I'm stopping by to invite you on over to my latest contest --called the “7 wonders” I'm hoping you will consider the enjoyment and challenges we offer in our contest. If you like, please consider my contest. You can find the contest page on the top left hand side. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems in the future. Today I will start by reading all you have posted this far..... Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"

Skat A

April 19, 2013 at 9:16 AM

Elle :-), Wishing you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it.. Luv~*~SKAT"