Unravelling the Tapestry

I found in my tapestry
a rare golden thread,
I began to unravel it
to see where it led

The weft that was freed 
from the intricate weave, 
changed the course of my life
more than I'd ever conceive

While the threads of my past
went back through the heddle,
they were detached from my present
as fate worked its treadle

The familiar tableau
that I'd known all those years,
one of struggle and sadness,
did soon disappear

As the mural was altered,
each new vignette  enlightened,
the scenes became joyous 
and my spirit was  brightened

Now, the tituli tells of
a hopeful potential,
one of love and compassion,
perhaps, exponential

S'true that our stories, our legends
are written by fate,
but one can change the outcome,
it is never too late
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Manassian Avatar
August 23, 2014 at 10:17 PM
I enjoyed this tremendously. I love how you gave us the terminology that speaks to the beauty of weaving tapestries. The message is itself a beautiful tapestry. All the best.
Brown Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 1:23 PM
Thank you Elieen, I always appreciate your feedback
Curtis Avatar
August 23, 2014 at 5:31 PM
Great write David, I'm not sure how many people know what a heddle is these days, but it brings me back to my first job, in the textile mills of Manchester
Brown Avatar
August 23, 2014 at 6:37 PM
Thank you Jerry, I'm not sure that I used the correct term in the second stanza, so your experienced perspective would be appreciated. Thank you sir and I look forward to reading your work as well.
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