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Unravelled

UNRAVELED Lives once entangled by the tender hands of fate Unraveled by the fingers of reality The fabric of love torn by loyalty and duty To what once held the promise of happiness Strangled by the tentacles of past commitments; Frightened by the possibilities of unconditional love The embers of passion smolder; paths divert His spirit resonates from the depths of my soul His eyes look out from the shadows of my memory His absence haunts each passing day Dreams relinquished Hope abandoned Love unraveled

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Date: 7/17/2014 8:34:00 PM
Talofa Jackie, welcome to PS am so glad you came on board. Love surely has unravelled, such beautiful imageries you have portrayed here. Just a friendly hint, read and comment on some new poems posted and they will visit you. Be seeing you soon. Many alofas, Tiaua.
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