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Unraveling

(this actually a rondolet, a shortened form of rondeau) Unraveling Stitches from our wedding quilt Unraveling Your so-called “business traveling" Anniversary streamers of guilt 25 years - the life we built Unraveling 12/1/11 Received 1st place

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/25/2012 11:18:00 AM

nod, I hear YOU! Light & Love

Dinda Minardi

Date: 12/8/2011 9:36:00 AM

To the point yet poetic.. So sad though... I think that's what makes you win. Congrats!!!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/8/2011 4:23:00 AM

So sad. Congratulations on your win x

Joyce Johnson

Date: 12/7/2011 7:22:00 PM

Very, very sad. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/7/2011 5:27:00 PM

LOVE it and that you WON big with it. Congrats, my friend.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/7/2011 3:24:00 PM

Dear Susan...I am giving you a great big hug....being in this club really stinks...I love the parallelism that couldn't be penned ANY STRONGER than with a wedding quilt...Love, Gwendolen

Bob Quigley

Date: 12/7/2011 2:36:00 PM

So much revealed in so few words. Nice write Susan. Congratulations

Kim Merryman

Date: 12/7/2011 2:24:00 PM

I like the way you worded this, Susan, although saddened by the theme. Congrats on your win and thank you for taking time to read and comment on my poems. It is greatly appreciated. Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/7/2011 12:44:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Beautiful" contest Susan. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 12/7/2011 12:20:00 PM

Susan congrats on your win, sad when relationships breakdown..David

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 12/5/2011 4:27:00 PM

oooh ! hope this is just a fantasy poem, Susan/ It is well done to be sure.... I mean the poem

Goode Guy

Date: 12/5/2011 3:44:00 PM

S.B., this terse quilt of humanities knots says lots, in a mere 22 words. May mending retie the bonds. ;-)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/5/2011 12:09:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your work about life..A husband who is gone a lot is good and bad..One can get a lot of work done but then no one to snuggle ..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara..Haven't done much embroidery since Caleb was born 12 years ago but I think that I am going to start back..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2011 6:32:00 PM

I see why you are enjoying this new form for you, Susan. You stitch it together so well!!!

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/3/2011 9:30:00 PM

beautifully you penned. God bless us all, my friend.bl

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/3/2011 6:12:00 PM

Awesome write Susan! I enjoyed reading your poem tonight! I like how the poem unfolds as you read on! This sounds like true reality! I hope all is well now for you! Fantastic Work!!