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Unquenchable Thirst

Bent on discovering the truth Stuck on igniting the flame Restarting the stunted growth All these things I want to know To experience the old as new Plot this pilgrimage as if it my own It is, who is to say it is not? Discover as if I were the first I am the boy with the unquenchable thirst Eager to start this tidal wave adventure Anxious to stop the things I won't remember From now on all I do Will command to occupy my mind And in turn subconsciously Leave the past behind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/26/2015 1:26:00 PM
Hi Jacob, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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Date: 3/22/2015 2:04:00 PM
Jacob, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/22/2015 8:51:00 AM
- Jacob, I enjoy your first poem here - A moving poem - "Leave the past behind" - Warm welcome to P- Soup! - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/22/2015 8:58:00 AM
Thank you very much!!!

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