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Unpurged Sad Memories

Evanescing into the lull of night Through a glint blushing around a faint moon; One unsolved query drifts without delight Fragile as last chimes…a requiem’s tune: How stars whisper adieu Their markings …faded blue As tears rush on grave’s pew When sadness chills— This blow instills A wail that spills : Though dreadful this fate, I’ll dance and excite ; My hope to find you along journey’s boon— For never would shattered dreams past, outdo New venture's thrills. 6/10/2018 The Puzzle Of My Rhyme Contest of Broken Wings Checked via howmanysyllables.com

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Date: 6/25/2018 6:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Well-written poem of life.
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Date: 6/24/2018 7:02:00 AM
Nette, congratulations on your win in my contest with this impressive write, well done ~
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Date: 6/23/2018 2:19:00 PM
Lovely imagery, nette. Congrats on your podium finish.
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Date: 6/12/2018 7:23:00 PM
Beautiful write...
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Date: 6/11/2018 11:32:00 PM
Nette.. You took a common story and you dressed her so splendidly that the write leaks regal. Her natural charms are not deminished, but the adornment of this princess leaves me spellbound!
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Date: 6/11/2018 11:27:00 AM
Nicely crafted nette...looks like a winner...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 6/11/2018 7:15:00 AM
- Perfect for this contest ... a sad poem - Good luck, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/11/2018 6:23:00 AM
Beautiful poem, as always, nette. Though the memories are sad, you described them eloquently..best for a win.
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Date: 6/11/2018 5:40:00 AM
One journey over, and another begins...Very nicely written Nette
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Date: 6/11/2018 3:22:00 AM
A time to mourn, a time for joy. A breakaway poem from the ordinary. Excellent in its metaphoric language!
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Date: 6/10/2018 11:54:00 AM
And so it be...Lovely write nette...All the best my friend
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Date: 6/10/2018 8:46:00 AM
Excellent write, Nette ... All the best ...
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