Unpurged Sad Memories

Evanescing into the lull of night
Through a glint blushing around a faint moon;
One unsolved query drifts without delight
     Fragile as last chimes…a requiem’s tune:
     How stars whisper adieu
     Their markings …faded blue
     As tears rush on grave’s pew
                            When sadness chills—
      This blow instills
        A wail that spills :
Though dreadful this fate, I’ll dance and excite ;
My hope to find you along journey’s boon—
For never would shattered dreams past,  outdo
                             New venture's thrills.


      
6/10/2018
The Puzzle Of My Rhyme Contest of Broken Wings
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Gentry Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 6:08 PM
Congratulations on your win! Well-written poem of life.
La France Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 7:02 AM
Nette, congratulations on your win in my contest with this impressive write, well done ~
Gauthier Avatar
June 23, 2018 at 2:19 PM
Lovely imagery, nette. Congrats on your podium finish.
Salehi Avatar
June 12, 2018 at 7:23 PM
Beautiful write...
Man Avatar
June 11, 2018 at 11:32 PM
Nette.. You took a common story and you dressed her so splendidly that the write leaks regal. Her natural charms are not deminished, but the adornment of this princess leaves me spellbound!
Warrior Avatar
June 11, 2018 at 11:27 AM
Nicely crafted nette...looks like a winner...love & light...^WW^
Andresen Avatar
June 11, 2018 at 7:15 AM
- Perfect for this contest ... a sad poem - Good luck, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
June 11, 2018 at 6:23 AM
Beautiful poem, as always, nette. Though the memories are sad, you described them eloquently..best for a win.
May Avatar
June 11, 2018 at 5:40 AM
One journey over, and another begins...Very nicely written Nette
Lalion Avatar
June 11, 2018 at 3:22 AM
A time to mourn, a time for joy. A breakaway poem from the ordinary. Excellent in its metaphoric language!
Michael Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 11:54 AM
And so it be...Lovely write nette...All the best my friend
Gupta Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 8:46 AM
Excellent write, Nette ... All the best ...
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