Notes About The Poem

Unprovoked

Untie knots of hate with...
       Unconditional love.
     Upsurge of violence,
      Unreal! Asian folks
 Under assault these days;
 Unprovoked, outrageous!
     Unity, what we need!


Submitted for...
Pleiades U Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Kim Merryman
Syllables checked at www.howmanysyllables.com
Date written: 04/30/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kendrick Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 7:29 AM
Sad situations are happening all around. We need to respect each other then things will get better. Congrats on this winner. Sara
Ibeh Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 12:57 PM
Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback and congrats, Sara:-)
Merryman Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 7:19 PM
Great message, Edward, and you portrayed your title well! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Ibeh Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 7:33 PM
Thank you so much for my placement and the congrats, Kim:-) Most obliged.
Allison Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 3:20 PM
such a timely message, many congrats on your win edward:-) hugs Jan xx
Ibeh Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 7:35 PM
Thank you very much, Jan :-)
Alex Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 6:55 AM
Congratulations!
Ibeh Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 7:36 PM
Thank you, Christuraj:-)
Y. Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 6:55 PM
WoW! Edward, You have penned a timely message with your Pleiades. You did an excellent job with the letter U. It was a challenge for me, but I managed to write something. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis
Ibeh Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 2:43 PM
Thanks for the visit and wonderful comments, Alexis:-) God bless.
Dietrich Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 5:12 PM
In light of all happening today, this one is SO relevent. Love it, Edward.
Ibeh Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 5:14 PM
Thank you, Andrea:-) I'm very pleased you loved my poem!
Pandit Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 3:48 PM
So timely and so on point! Your poem delivers a very important message in just a few words.
Ibeh Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 5:05 PM
Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback and visit, Vijay:-)
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