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It wasn’t her looks which made her so unappealing No, ma’am ... that girl is a certified cutie pie It wasn’t her demure charm that caused man-child rebel teens to sissy shy away No, sir ... that young, yet-to-be buxom woman, cocooned in a size 5 butterfly body, is so Spanish Harlem Rose beautiful ... Eyes don’t lie, so says this fanboy fella: Ah- ooh ah She’s gonna honey bee a statuesque, regal queen Latifah According to my secret admirer, local enquirer text send ... why is she so unpopular then? Perhaps, it’s because she refuse to let herself be deflowered and degraded, by silly boyz-to-men That’s the type of Zulu woman, me low-popularity humble soul want as my better-half best friend

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Date: 8/15/2018 9:42:00 AM
I think that’s the best kind, Freddie!
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Date: 8/14/2018 6:58:00 PM
Wow... very powerful...
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Date: 8/14/2018 4:45:00 PM
Great one Freddie. Creatively written with a strong message :)
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Date: 8/14/2018 2:22:00 PM
Freddie, I am so touched that you were inspired by my poem - this is awesome and such a powerful message about self-respect, I think every young girl needs to know she is valuable and should not give herself away-
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Date: 8/14/2018 12:09:00 PM
I love it that she is unpopular for all the RIGHT reasons, Freddie. Thanks for making my day!
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Date: 8/14/2018 11:07:00 AM
Awesomeness! Love peace and sunshine my friend, xomo <3
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Date: 8/14/2018 9:25:00 AM
smooth write...almost abstract...nice
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