Unpopular



It wasn’t her looks
which made her so unappealing
No, ma’am ... 
that girl is a certified cutie pie

It wasn’t her demure charm
that caused man-child rebel teens
to sissy shy away
No, sir ... that young, yet-to-be 
buxom woman,
cocooned in a size 5 butterfly body,
is so Spanish Harlem Rose   beautiful ... 
Eyes don’t lie, so says 
this fanboy fella:  Ah- ooh ah
She’s gonna honey bee
a statuesque,         
                regal queen Latifah

According to my secret admirer,
local enquirer text send ...
why
is she so unpopular then?

Perhaps, it’s because
she refuse to let herself be deflowered
and degraded,
by silly boyz-to-men

That’s the type of Zulu woman,
me low-popularity humble soul want
as my better-half best friend
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Man Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 9:42 AM
I think that’s the best kind, Freddie!
Salehi Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 6:58 PM
Wow... very powerful...
Sands Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 4:45 PM
Great one Freddie. Creatively written with a strong message :)
Faulkner Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 2:22 PM
Freddie, I am so touched that you were inspired by my poem - this is awesome and such a powerful message about self-respect, I think every young girl needs to know she is valuable and should not give herself away-
Krutsinger Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 12:09 PM
I love it that she is unpopular for all the RIGHT reasons, Freddie. Thanks for making my day!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 11:07 AM
Awesomeness! Love peace and sunshine my friend, xomo <3
Blown Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 9:25 AM
smooth write...almost abstract...nice
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