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Unpolished Skies

if my tomorrow were to come with unpolished skies still my day would shine amidst thoughts of you in this breadth of night's chill i am wrapped in the depths of dreams as they awaken beneath the veils of darkness

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 12/28/2019 5:38:00 PM
Your contrasts actually blend seamlessly, it flows together wonderfully, Sandra!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/28/2019 9:55:00 PM
Thank you so much Michelle :) hugs
Date: 12/27/2019 7:55:00 PM
Dream...dream....dream...whenever I want you all I have to do...is dreeeam...Siiigh...
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Date: 12/27/2019 8:39:00 PM
to me dreams are the foundation of life...it makes the journey more exciting...to stop dreaming is to stop living...
Date: 12/27/2019 11:10:00 AM
This one lit up my imagination, giving me ideas for two more poems so thank you and God bless you Sandra.
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Date: 12/27/2019 1:52:00 PM
Thank you Caren...and yay...i will venture over to check them out as soon as i get caught up... hugs
Date: 12/27/2019 7:23:00 AM
So true--everything in life feels so much better when in thoughts of love--well written, Sandy.
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Date: 12/27/2019 1:51:00 PM
Thank you Vijay...it's probably a cloudy or rainy day in your corner of the world as well...i was just making my own sunshine... hugs :)
Date: 12/27/2019 6:47:00 AM
Another beautiful and enchanting poem from your amazing pen my friend. Days do seem so much brighter, regardless of what we see when our mind is filled with thoughts of someone special.
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Date: 12/27/2019 1:50:00 PM
You are right my dear friend... sometimes we need to make our own sunshine...it's rainy here today... thank you so much Chris... hugs :)

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