Unpolished Skies

if my tomorrow were to come
with unpolished skies
still my day would shine 
amidst thoughts of you

in this breadth 
of night's chill
i am wrapped
in the depths
of dreams
as they awaken
beneath the veils
of darkness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Faulkner Avatar
December 28, 2019 at 5:38 PM
Your contrasts actually blend seamlessly, it flows together wonderfully, Sandra!
Adams Avatar
December 28, 2019 at 9:55 PM
Thank you so much Michelle :) hugs
Wolves Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 7:55 PM
Dream...dream....dream...whenever I want you all I have to do...is dreeeam...Siiigh...
Adams Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 8:39 PM
to me dreams are the foundation of life...it makes the journey more exciting...to stop dreaming is to stop living...
Krutsinger Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 11:10 AM
This one lit up my imagination, giving me ideas for two more poems so thank you and God bless you Sandra.
Adams Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 1:52 PM
Thank you Caren...and yay...i will venture over to check them out as soon as i get caught up... hugs
Pandit Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 7:23 AM
So true--everything in life feels so much better when in thoughts of love--well written, Sandy.
Adams Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 1:51 PM
Thank you Vijay...it's probably a cloudy or rainy day in your corner of the world as well...i was just making my own sunshine... hugs :)
Green Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 6:47 AM
Another beautiful and enchanting poem from your amazing pen my friend. Days do seem so much brighter, regardless of what we see when our mind is filled with thoughts of someone special.
Adams Avatar
December 27, 2019 at 1:50 PM
You are right my dear friend... sometimes we need to make our own sunshine...it's rainy here today... thank you so much Chris... hugs :)
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