Unpolished Diamond

Inner beauty is
An unpolished diamond 
Sculpted by the vivencies 
Molding a new you
Passing the tests life presents
Like fire forged metal












10-13-2015

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James Fraser

Date: 10/20/2015 2:33:00 PM

The wondrous thing about an unpolished Diamond, is it's pure. It's until man gets it's hand on it, that they turn them ugly. Love the messages in this piece, James :) :)

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 10/20/2015 5:10:00 PM

Thank you very much James.

Michael Tor

Date: 10/14/2015 5:26:00 AM

Nayda this is awesome! Loved this poem. Excellent..WOW. Inner beauty is a wonderful beauty...

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 10/14/2015 7:23:00 AM

Thank you very much Michael. Cultivating inner beauty should be a goal.