Unpleasant Thirst

Lover defined sweet
Taking me beyond
My bitter end
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 8, 2010 at 3:57 PM
gentle loving poem,
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March 5, 2010 at 6:31 PM
Lovely write Cecil, I do have to say that i thank you ever so much for your ever kind words. It does look like i will be a stranger from the soup from the end of this month, infinitive >> its been lovely >> all the very best >> Chowa .... from the Highlander >> James
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March 4, 2010 at 12:17 PM
What an interesting reflection--found myself reading it a few times. If this is for the contest, best wishes. Thank you for sharing your poem and for your kind comment on mine. Keep on writing!! Karen
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