Unphysical

I drop my words
Into a vacuum
-So there's enough room-
But they're vacuumed up
By the lack of air
'Cause I made no wings
To bear them

Without force
I let them go
I let gravity
Take it's course
Ashes to ashes
Dust to dust
Go up in flames
Or slowly rust

All that's eternal
Is that's pure
Pain and hate
And love -no more

And I'm so scared
That it's all in my head
That life's a steady march
To dead
Dead ends
and culs-de-sac
Take one step forward
Then quick!
Turn back.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Agustin Avatar
July 1, 2024 at 7:41 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Breese Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 1:14 PM
So awesome much better than mine -love first time poet
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February 15, 2016 at 6:51 PM
Martha, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 11:12 PM
MARTHA, thank you for sharing.... Luv SKAT
Berdoo Avatar
March 23, 2014 at 4:36 AM
Please, continue to write, you have much to say. Enjoyed your poem.
Brown Avatar
August 9, 2012 at 5:28 AM
A belated welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Martha. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol 08/09/2012
Crowe Avatar
August 9, 2012 at 12:17 PM
Hello Carol, Thank you for your lovely welcome- I'm really enjoying looking through all the great material on this site. Martha
Flanagan Avatar
August 6, 2012 at 12:38 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup! I really enjoyed reading your poem, nice write!~Tammy~
Crowe Avatar
August 6, 2012 at 9:05 AM
Thank you- I'm happy to be here!
La Traille Avatar
August 5, 2012 at 10:27 PM
this was amazing
Crowe Avatar
August 6, 2012 at 9:04 AM
thanks, I'm glad you liked it!
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