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Your smile used to light up my heart like a spark of light. And yet, love died in its shadow, shrouded in pain. The surface of trust was somehow scratched; and susceptible, it started to rust. Hope tried to seal it with placebos, empty platitudes, and a fountain of sparkling phases; that spoke of love won, love lost, and love yet to be. Still, I watched you walk away; as my eyes filled with tears. Sweet words, once used to seduce and flatter, have morphed; into unpalatable departing words. And yet, life moves on, without guilt, apologies, promises or guarantees.

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