Unnoticed Miracles

Gears? What gears?
The trains left. 
There's no station.
The mind's adrift;
A faultless combatant
In an unending western,
Moving through cages
Unlocked from tired rules.

Look! The sun!
Just beyond that canyon!
Let's write the future upon it's glance.
The motion of our thoughts will unearth
Unnoticed miracles.
Though we will notice. We will laugh.
We will sing of our own bounty.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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La France Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 5:04 AM
I just love the "concept" of this poem "our mind adrift, unending, and finding all the unnoticed miracles" I think this poem is stunning. I just love travelling by train, sitting there, looking out the window at nature, towns, unnoticed usually, things, drifting by~~
Mehta Avatar
December 25, 2010 at 4:06 AM
Very qualitative and intellectual write on Unnoticed miracles, Matt
Onclaud Avatar
December 24, 2010 at 4:11 PM
seizing the moment with this beauty of a poem, matt! what a treat for me.. :) nette
Pangelov Avatar
December 24, 2010 at 10:05 AM
Gears? In the rush is locked biggest vice. To anticipate life? Bright Christmas!
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