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Unnoticed Miracles

Gears? What gears? The trains left. There's no station. The mind's adrift; A faultless combatant In an unending western, Moving through cages Unlocked from tired rules. Look! The sun! Just beyond that canyon! Let's write the future upon it's glance. The motion of our thoughts will unearth Unnoticed miracles. Though we will notice. We will laugh. We will sing of our own bounty.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/6/2011 5:04:00 AM
I just love the "concept" of this poem "our mind adrift, unending, and finding all the unnoticed miracles" I think this poem is stunning. I just love travelling by train, sitting there, looking out the window at nature, towns, unnoticed usually, things, drifting by~~
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Date: 12/25/2010 4:06:00 AM
Very qualitative and intellectual write on Unnoticed miracles, Matt
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Date: 12/24/2010 4:11:00 PM
seizing the moment with this beauty of a poem, matt! what a treat for me.. :) nette
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Date: 12/24/2010 10:05:00 AM
Gears? In the rush is locked biggest vice. To anticipate life? Bright Christmas!
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