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Unnamed Sonnet

Not just age and miles that takes it's toll But situations can cause what you see Some are from the age of sweet Rock-N-Roll Others happened while on a wild spree Folds and wrinkles, gouges and broken parts seems to all come with the territory Whether young or old they all once had spark Each one you see can tell a good story Some came quietly during a cold night There are others that seem to just appear The tough ones don't give up without a fight But sooner or later they all get here Unnamed Sonnet can be read two ways "Junk Yard Cars" or "As A Woman Does Age"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/3/2011 12:57:00 AM
Congratulations on the win with this lovely poem, Paula
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Date: 11/2/2011 11:39:00 AM
Age creeps up on all of us Paula. Some deal with it better than others. I guess I'm from the "age of sweet Rock-N-Roll." Beautiful sonnet! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/2/2011 9:37:00 AM
Congrats Paula on HM for this exquisite entry my friend..enjoy honor with luv..
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Date: 11/2/2011 8:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your HM in Brian's contest Paula. I enjoyed this.
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Date: 11/2/2011 5:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "1-14 any theme" contest Paula. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/14/2010 5:47:00 PM
I can see your idea in the light of each junk yard cars and as a woman does age...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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