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Unnamed God's of the Winds

Unnamed God’s Of The Winds Ethereal unseeing creatures drink up the feathery winds Immortals, ancient gods, ride on the backs of clouds Smoke them like cigarettes unfiltered Rise invisible to drink the sky and everything in it Once rain fills them up they turn to fog Another unnamed god Filling up the bodies of the wind Fog clouds empty again as rain They come down just the same as puffs of smoke Solid winds are stronger on the storm Dragged down by water falls then drowned You can feel them on the skin between the drops Falling through the atmosphere Created on 12/23/14 for -Shadow Hamilton’s -“Gods Of Winds” Poetry Contest

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Date: 1/2/2015 11:45:00 PM
Earl, Congrats on your win... Linda :
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 1/3/2015 5:43:00 AM
Hi Linda, Thank you! Have a pleasant week end. Earl
Date: 1/2/2015 11:19:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Earl:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/2/2015 3:41:00 PM
I failed to follow the rules and got no where lol! Crime doesn't always pay!!! hugs jan xxx
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Date: 1/2/2015 3:37:00 PM
Hi Jan, Thank you for commenting on my illegal poem. I broke all the rules but I feel good. I knew at best I was shooting for a HM, In some circles that stands for "Homogenized Milk." It sounds healthy. Take care. Earl
Date: 1/2/2015 7:48:00 AM
Congrats on the win and wish you all the best of 2015, earl
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Date: 1/2/2015 9:43:00 AM
Hi Dr. Mehta. Thank you so much. I really did not want to enter this contest. I'm glad I did. I do not like to write about "gods." I am happy to have an HM in light of the fact that I did not follow the rules. Congratulations on your excellent poem and win. Happy New Year. Earl
Date: 1/2/2015 4:33:00 AM
Another pointer to your excellence, congrats Earl....huggs
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Date: 1/2/2015 9:50:00 AM
Hi Kayod5, Thank you so much. I'm lucky that I got the HM rating. I purposely did not follow the rules. I do not like to write about "gods." I wrote about winds instead. Notice the title, "Unnamed gods." That is correct. They remain unnamed. Shadow had mercy on me. Have a great day and a Happy New Year. Earl
Date: 1/2/2015 2:52:00 AM
congrats on HM Earl I wanted wind gods names though. great poem but off theme ty for your support hugs
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Date: 1/2/2015 3:50:00 AM
Hi Shadow, Thank you so much. You are absolutely right. I did stray from the gods idea. I hope you enjoyed my wind creation. Thank you for giving me the HM consideration. Happy New Year. Earl
Date: 12/23/2014 4:01:00 PM
Oh this is an awesome description of the gods of winds. You are so unique the way you think and it is always a pleasure to read! Hugsxx
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Date: 12/23/2014 5:19:00 PM
Hi Casarah, Thank you so much. I appreciate your kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Nature is not as natural as it looks but it sure is a lot of fun. I liked playing with it and some of the words that help to explain it and move it along on a gentle breeze. I hope you have a wonderful and fun filled holiday season and a very Merry Christmas. Take care, Earl
Date: 12/23/2014 11:16:00 AM
Amazing imagination Earl. I love your story, it sound almost magical. Have a great Christmas.
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Date: 12/23/2014 12:28:00 PM
Hi Brenda, Thank you so much, I almost did not enter this contest as I do not endorse false gods. I purposely approached the contest from a different angle. I simply treated the wind as the wind and the way it interacts with water as rain and storm and other natural elements. Have a wonderful day and a Merry Merry Christmas. Take care. Earl
Date: 12/23/2014 5:18:00 AM
- Earl, a lovely poem - I wish you and your family a beautiful Christmas - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/23/2014 12:34:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, Thank you so much. I hope that you and your family have a wonderful holiday season and a very Merry Christmas. Take care. Earl
Date: 12/23/2014 2:32:00 AM
beautiful imagery Earl - good luck:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/23/2014 3:07:00 AM
Its just after 9am here - not been sleeping well lately but actually had a better night last night:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/23/2014 3:00:00 AM
Good morning Jan, Thanks! Do you ever sleep? I wish you well in the contest also. Have a great day. Have fun! Earl

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