Un-Made Beds

I’ve always found a beauty in it
 
The creases that lay like clumsy limbs
 
Corners of gowns coming unashamedly away
 
From the cotton skin
 
All proud in its off-white softness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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January 30, 2012 at 8:48 AM
Thank you for sharing apart of yourself with us in your poetry Gracie. Love, Carol
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January 29, 2012 at 3:04 PM
Smile ˜ Owwww, this is sooo uniquely beautiful in such subtle way * Enticely to ones imagination and I just love the thought of gowns and cotton skin amid silk soft pillows enhancing these shades in pink * My love, Always, John!:) ˜
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January 29, 2012 at 2:13 PM
Nicely done Gracie,I like it. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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