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lying in bed, on a holiday morning, the mind is free to frolic


 

On this winter morning I’m daydreaming of warm summer daysprings, blue lake glistenings, butterscotch skin, heartbeat quickenings, and unmade decisions behind blue eyes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 1/3/2021 10:38:00 AM
Lying in bed can be dangerous! Just ask Trump! Aloha! Rico
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Anais vionet
Date: 1/4/2021 5:41:00 AM
Am I a chicken to “lay” in bed? =P I can never decide which is right. aloha!
Date: 1/3/2021 8:11:00 AM
Make your decisions wisely, Anais, lest your blue eyes be stained by tears.
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Date: 1/3/2021 9:21:00 AM
Good advice Jon =]
Date: 1/3/2021 5:55:00 AM
Beautifully haunting verse and vision. Breathtakingly alive and uplifting - God bless you always
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Anais vionet
Date: 1/3/2021 9:21:00 AM
Thank you =]