Notes About The Poem

lying in bed, on a holiday morning, the mind is free to frolic


 

Unmade

On this winter morning
I’m daydreaming 
of warm summer daysprings, 
blue lake glistenings,
butterscotch skin,
heartbeat quickenings,
and unmade decisions behind blue eyes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Leffanta Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 10:38 AM
Lying in bed can be dangerous! Just ask Trump! Aloha! Rico
Vionet Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 5:41 AM
Am I a chicken to “lay” in bed? =P I can never decide which is right. aloha!
Gondolf Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 8:11 AM
Make your decisions wisely, Anais, lest your blue eyes be stained by tears.
Vionet Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 9:21 AM
Good advice Jon =]
Mcintosh Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 5:55 AM
Beautifully haunting verse and vision. Breathtakingly alive and uplifting - God bless you always
Vionet Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 9:21 AM
Thank you =]
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