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Unlucky Snake

Unlucky snake A slippery fellow named mandrake From the zoo made a swift prison break But a redback named Crunch Had him for lunch Down here our spiders eat snake. AND,if you don’t believe me check out the photographs on my blog Limerick contest May 8th 2010

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Date: 5/12/2010 4:18:00 AM
Congratulations, Margaret, on your success in the Linda-Marie’s “Zaney Zoo” contest with this fun limerick. Your creative humor soars with amusement! Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha! Laughingly with Love, Dane Ann
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Date: 5/9/2010 9:47:00 PM
Wonderful write...Congrats on the win in the contest! Dan C
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Date: 5/9/2010 7:27:00 AM
Aye, the Redbacks are nasty little blighters. Congratulations on your win in the contest Margaret >> James
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Date: 5/8/2010 8:54:00 PM
Great write and a well deserved win in the contest. Congrats my friend. . I have placed two new writes today link with each other. Hope you would find it interesting. Love and best wishes.... Ravindra... Margaret Foster
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Date: 5/8/2010 6:02:00 PM
Funny! Has me smiling. Congratulations on your third place in the contest. Way to go. Enjoy your big success. Karen
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Date: 5/8/2010 5:22:00 PM
congratulations, margaret, one of those with great limerick rhythm as well. LUv, andrea
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Date: 5/8/2010 5:17:00 PM
congratulations Margaret. Fearsome spiders!_robert
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Date: 5/8/2010 1:36:00 PM
Congrats Margaret on your success in my zoo contest.. with your snake Limerick .. thankxxx for supporting my contests ..luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 5/8/2010 8:41:00 AM
VERY FUNNY! It sounds like you have some huge spiders, Margaret. Those arachoids give me the creeps; I was actually pulling for the snake. LOL Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/8/2010 7:49:00 AM
This is really good, Margaret and sure to be in the top!! Everything a limerick should be. So you call the Kangaroos down there Big Red? I should think one of them could kick the bejesus out of a lion, don't you?Luv, andrea
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Date: 5/8/2010 1:17:00 AM
this is awesome, nice to know some snakes gets eaten, by the second worst of my fears, enjoyed the humor,..p.d.
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