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Unlucky Me

While gazing at the sky A gnat flew in my eye Causing me to wince in pain Using the faucet spout I tried to flush it out So I could see clear again When the gnat was dislodged It came out very smudged Like a soggy wet wheat grain When next I watched the sky A bird pooped in my eye So I had to flush again I must be unlucky For what happened to me Because it had me in pain So when birds are on high And there are gnats nearby Caution I have to maintain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/22/2013 6:58:00 PM
Entertaining poem. Congrats, John!
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Date: 12/18/2013 9:44:00 PM
Congratulations John!
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john beharry
Date: 12/19/2013 9:27:00 PM
Thank you, Abdulhaf. Nice to hear from you! Have a fabulous day!
Date: 12/18/2013 9:46:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara
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john beharry
Date: 12/19/2013 9:28:00 PM
Thank you, Sara. Have a delightful day!
Date: 12/15/2013 4:04:00 PM
Congrats on your winning place John, keep gnats and birds away, well done Joe..)
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john beharry
Date: 12/19/2013 9:31:00 PM
Thank you, Joe. Nice to hear from you! I will follow your advice. Have a pleasant day!
Date: 12/15/2013 8:32:00 AM
Congratulations john xx
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john beharry
Date: 12/19/2013 9:33:00 PM
Thank you, Mandy. Have a glorious day!
Date: 12/15/2013 8:31:00 AM
So much fun! Congrats.
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john beharry
Date: 12/19/2013 9:34:00 PM
Hi Richard, nice to hear from you! Thanks for your compliment. Have a fantastic day!
Date: 12/14/2013 7:53:00 PM
Thanks for your interesting poem and congratulations on the win, John
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john beharry
Date: 12/19/2013 9:25:00 PM
Thank you, Dr Mehta for your compliment and for sponsoring this contest. Have a superb day!
Date: 12/9/2013 5:16:00 AM
Light humor flows, Beharry
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john beharry
Date: 12/9/2013 8:20:00 PM
Thank you, Dr Mehta. It's good to enjoy a bit of humour. Have a great day!