Unlock the Mystery

You say that you love me
I must be to darn blind to see
Why I am so sad and lonely? 
Come and end my misery
Love is such a mystery
My tears match the deep sea
I want to be filled with glee
But you said that you love me
Why do I feel utter misery?
Baby hear my earnest plea
Come and unlock the mystery 




08-13-16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Raven Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 8:49 AM
Hi Alexis, your thoughts on the most beautiful of all mysteries is such a gentl piece of poetry. Your emotions singing from the song of your heart. Another song that sings into the readers heart and stirs such deep emotions. This has to be a seven Alexis. Hugs....Mike. XX
Devnath  Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 11:43 AM
Really a nice poem of love feeling, my friend. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl
Dietrich Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 10:42 AM
I really enjoyed this one, Alexis. Very much!
Marie Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 7:00 AM
A very expressive piece that feels "lyrical" to me, as if to "sing" is to release these powerful emotions. Great writing. blessings, lynn p.s. my first ;Monorhyme", a favourite :-)
Manassian Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 5:27 AM
Deep pain.....words must be coupled up with action. Your write reveals this well. Hugs, dear one
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