Roy Pett Poet Pantoum

Unlimited Love- Barry White Tribute

Unlimited love- Barry White tribute.

You’re loves unlimited, embraced in a “satin soul”
oh baby, baby, “never, never, gonna give you up”
“I’ve got so much to give,”I feel out of control
“can’t get enough of your love babe,” my loving cup, 

oh baby, baby “never, never, gonna give you up”
“You’re my first my last my everything,” my dream
“can’t get enough of your love babe,” my loving cup 
teach me how to love, console me with “love’s theme,”

“you’re my first my last my everything,” my dream
I love you so much, “I’ve got so much to give,” feel free 
teach me how to love, console me with “love’s theme,”
lady love, “it’s ecstasy when you lay down next to me,”

I love you so much, “I’ve got so much to give,” feel free
“You see the trouble with me,” you’re no ones fool
lady love, “it’s ecstasy when you lay down next to me,”
“what am I gonna do with you,” my heart you doth rule,

“you see the trouble with me,” you’re no ones fool
“I’ve got so much to give,” I feel out of control
“what am I gonna do with you,” my heart you doth rule,
you’re loves unlimited,  embraced in a “Satin soul”.

4/6/2018
Contest music pantoum 
Sponsored by Silent one.
 
Pantoum using song titles by Barry White,
“Satin soul”
“ never, never, gonna give you up”
“I’ve got so much to give “
“can’t get enough of your love babe “
“Love’s theme”
“ it’s ecstasy when you lay down next to me “
“ you’re my first my last my everything “
“what am I gonna do with you “
“ you see the trouble with me “

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Sandra Haight May 30, 2018 at 2:22 PM Roy, congratulations on your First Place win! You wove in the song titles so well! Sandra Roy Pett June 2, 2018 at 2:15 PM Thank you so much for your congratulations and very kind comment Sandra which is really appreciated. :))

Heidi Sands May 26, 2018 at 7:24 AM Congratulations for your top win Roy! :) Roy Pett May 26, 2018 at 9:38 AM Thanks Heidi, wow what a lovely surprise, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))

Vijay Pandit May 25, 2018 at 6:30 AM Back with congrats Roy for your well deserved win at the top spot! Roy Pett May 25, 2018 at 7:14 AM Thank you so much for your congratulations Vijay much appreciated. :))

Susan Ashley May 24, 2018 at 8:53 PM Congratulations, Roy, on your excellent win with this sexy BW inspired poem. A beautifully penned pantoum! Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan Roy Pett May 25, 2018 at 4:53 AM Thank you so much for your congratulations and very kind comment Susan, wow what a lovely surprise and I’m really happy with my placement as I enjoyed writing this, thanks again for your support and encouragement much appreciated my friend. :))

Mike Gentile May 24, 2018 at 1:57 PM Congrats on your top placement with Barry, Roy, well done! Roy Pett May 24, 2018 at 4:02 PM Thank you so much for your congratulations Mike, really pleased with my placement and your support is much appreciated. :))

Susan Gentry May 24, 2018 at 1:52 PM Congratulations on your #1 win with Barry White in the music pentoum contest. Well done! Roy Pett May 24, 2018 at 3:49 PM Thank you so much for your congratulations Susan, I enjoyed writing this and really pleased it was placed, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))

Anne-Lise Andresen May 24, 2018 at 1:36 PM - Congratulations on your wonderful 1st place in the competition, a great music choice Roy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Roy Pett May 24, 2018 at 3:46 PM Thank you so much for your congratulations Anne-Lise, Barry White was an amazing performer, thanks again for your support and encouragement much appreciated. :))

Tom Cunningham May 24, 2018 at 12:58 PM Big congratulations Roy. Well done. Tom. Roy Pett May 24, 2018 at 3:37 PM Thank you so much for your congratulations Tom, so pleased with my placement and your support. :))

Alexis Y. May 24, 2018 at 12:42 PM Hi Roy , I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your top win in the contest:-)Alexis Roy Pett May 24, 2018 at 3:00 PM Thank you so much for your congratulations Alexis, I’m over the moon with my placement really enjoyed writing this, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))

Silent One May 24, 2018 at 11:52 AM You can't beat a bit of Barry White can ya... Although you did not use many titles, I really enjoyed your poem, I thought it flowed very well... Congratulations on your first place in the contest.. Roy Pett May 24, 2018 at 2:58 PM Wow thank you so much for my placement in your excellent contest S.O. I thoroughly enjoyed writing this as when I saw the contest Barry White came to mind he was an amazing performer, thanks again for your support and encouragement much appreciated. :))

Nette Onclaud April 6, 2018 at 3:37 PM love the 'soul-feel' of this marvelous poem, roy... barry white really inspired you to pen this gem.. huggs Roy Pett April 6, 2018 at 3:56 PM Thank you so much for your very kind comment Nette, when I saw this contest his was the first name I thought of, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))

Tom Cunningham April 6, 2018 at 10:54 AM Great tribute Roy, seems daunting to me to compose a verse from just song titles, great write. Good luck. Tom Roy Pett April 6, 2018 at 3:49 PM Thank you very much for your very kind comment Tom, I am sure you have no problem writing any form of poetry you have natural talent my friend. :))

Alexis Y. April 6, 2018 at 8:54 AM WoW! Roy, I really enjoyed this Pantoum. I enjoyed Barry's deep and soulful voice. You did a great job with the song titles and made a good write. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis Roy Pett April 6, 2018 at 3:39 PM Thank you so much for your very kind comment and best wishes Alexis, Barry did have an amazing voice, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))

Vijay Pandit April 6, 2018 at 7:05 AM Musical and lovely....well written Pantoum Roy..best for a win. Roy Pett April 6, 2018 at 7:14 AM Thank you so much for your very kind comment Vijay, I really appreciate your support and encouragement. :))