Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Poet Triolet

Unleash the Passion

Unleash the passion within my soul
the grace of my Savior is my pardon
my prayer to You, Lord, make me whole
unleash the passion within my soul
help me lose myself to give You control
and dance with You in your garden
unleash the passion within my soul
the grace of my Savior is my pardon

Unleash the love within my soul
in You, I am a new creation
Your love alone has made me whole
unleash the love within my soul
the sin of this world has taken its toll
my heart cries for your salvation
unleash the love within my soul
in You, I am a new creation

for Unleash contest (Paula Swanson)
third place


"But you are not controlled by your sinful nature. You are controlled by the Spirit if you have the Spirit of God living in you." - Romans 8:9

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Christopher Bunton February 29, 2012 at 6:07 AM congratulations!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 28, 2012 at 9:01 AM congrats Rhonda on a brilliant win luv for this marvelous write ..

Carol Sunshine Brown February 28, 2012 at 5:28 AM Congratulations on your super placement in Paula's "Unleashed" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson February 27, 2012 at 11:32 PM A really great entry. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Jon Arno February 25, 2012 at 5:30 PM Create in me a clean heart oh God and renew a right spirit within me...I love how you inserted....unleash the love within my soul Super write Rhonda :) I'm sure you have touched His heart with your cry Jon Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 25, 2012 at 8:20 PM Thank you Jon!

Amanda Turnure February 20, 2012 at 11:21 AM Beautiful! If everyone unleashed the love they have maybe our world would be a better place. God Bless and good luck! Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 21, 2012 at 1:34 PM Thank you, Amanda! You are so right. Blessings, Rhonda :)

Erich Goller February 19, 2012 at 10:10 AM That's lovely prayer poem,nice in form.Thanks for sharing it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 19, 2012 at 3:18 PM Thank you, Erich! I always appreciate your comments. Blessings, Rhonda

Broken Butterfly February 19, 2012 at 7:50 AM Rhonda your poem for Paula's contest is outstanding. You captured the essence of unleash well. Thanks for all your comments and support Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 19, 2012 at 3:17 PM Thank you, BB! I appreciate your comments. I enjoy reading your work...looking forward to reading more. Blessings, Rhonda

Andrea Dietrich February 18, 2012 at 10:32 PM hey, how interesting. My unleashed poem is a triolet too!! (not like yours of course, but it's cool we chose the same form for it). Good luck, but you won't need it. THis is sure to do well. Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 19, 2012 at 3:15 PM *learned Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 18, 2012 at 10:45 PM I love writing triolets, but I have learner a lot from reading yours. They only work when the repeated lines are strong. Thanks for your encouragement. Rhonda :)

Joyce Johnson February 18, 2012 at 2:48 PM Wonderful. I hope she appreciates it as much as do I. Thank you Rhonda for your appreciated comments on my poetry. Loe, Joyce Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 18, 2012 at 10:42 PM Thank you, Joyce. This was a poem I needed to write today win or lose. I appreciate your kind words. Blessings. Rhonda

Kash Poet February 18, 2012 at 10:47 AM Very good approach to the contest theme.Enjoyed the read Rhonda.Best wishes. Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 18, 2012 at 8:14 PM Thanks, Kash!!

Kim Merryman February 18, 2012 at 10:13 AM This is beautiful, Rhonda. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 18, 2012 at 8:14 PM Thanks, Kim!!