Unleaded and Unleashed (In Beverly Hills)

Complaining - the price for sure!
The brand  of the gas not pure...
TP was Gold then
In line like a hen...
Would love to give his rash cure...

for Carolyn Devonshire's contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 3:09 PM
Interesting Limerick that you have penned in this one.. Great write.. Keep the creative pen flowing ...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..I appreicate the comment and the offer of friendship....I feel that I already know so many of the people on here even though I really don't.. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 9:40 AM
Hey, a late congrats here on making the winner circle! LUv, Andrea
Green Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 9:23 AM
Congrats on your win!
Fraser Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 3:56 AM
Many congratulations Iolanda on your win in Carolyn's contest >> James
Freeman Avatar
June 12, 2010 at 8:30 PM
Congratulations, Iolanda on your worthy poem's place. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
June 12, 2010 at 8:41 AM
Congrats Iolanda on your winning poem in the Limerick contest with this wonderful write ..enjoy a wonderful win today..with luv.. Linda-Marie..
Spence Sr Avatar
June 11, 2010 at 8:59 AM
This is an excellent limerick. I am still smiling. Great job! Joseph
Dietrich Avatar
June 10, 2010 at 5:51 PM
great entry, Iolanda!! Good luck in the contest. LUv, Andrea
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