Unknown Land

I hold on another day 
These finger tips are falling can not stop
A love that dies i try to hide
A smile that has dropped
Once so in love 
Like flying doves reaching the tallest heights
Now its the fights that hold the heights
There is no love insight
Just a fading hidden passion
Crawling into unknown land
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 13, 2010 at 5:30 AM
Sad poem but clever in the writing. Love Roger x
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June 12, 2010 at 3:23 AM
Strong emotional words Sarah, quite a few of us crawl into this unknown land >> James
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June 12, 2010 at 3:10 AM
Nice thoughts on unknown land
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