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Unknown Land

I hold on another day These finger tips are falling can not stop A love that dies i try to hide A smile that has dropped Once so in love Like flying doves reaching the tallest heights Now its the fights that hold the heights There is no love insight Just a fading hidden passion Crawling into unknown land

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Date: 6/13/2010 5:30:00 AM
Sad poem but clever in the writing. Love Roger x
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Date: 6/12/2010 3:23:00 AM
Strong emotional words Sarah, quite a few of us crawl into this unknown land >> James
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Date: 6/12/2010 3:10:00 AM
Nice thoughts on unknown land
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