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Unknown Future

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Below is the poem entitled Unknown Future which was written by poet Fetta Cheese. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Unknown Future

They ask me,
‘What will you be?’
The answer is inevitable
Although not always understandable

They say to me,
‘You should do this’
The answer is direct
But at the same time ambiguous

They ask me,
‘When will you grow up?’
The answer is never
My heart will stay young forever

I ask myself
‘Can you, do it?’
The answer is…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 10/10/2017 1:38:00 PM
I can connect this poetry to my life and so it's wonderful.
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Date: 10/7/2017 9:17:00 AM
Fetta, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement!
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Date: 10/7/2017 1:05:00 AM
I, as well, keep a firm grip on the child inside, (some people call me immature - I've been called WAY worse, lol), and I take pride in it! This is a wonderful write, "Fetta", and it put a smile on my face. Blessings! :-)
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Date: 9/29/2017 6:41:00 PM
Very clever, Fetta! Welcome to PS.
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Date: 9/29/2017 11:50:00 AM
It's good to be on the positive side. lovely write!. Welcome to Poetry soup.
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Date: 9/29/2017 10:16:00 AM
Always important to have hope.. nice first post.. Welcome to the soup.. Interesting user name..
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