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As the blood drips Whiskey she sips And tears roll down her face She looks at herself And thinks what else Except what a huge disgrace With her heart torn And her mind worn She believes shes losing it all But then she remembers Like sparks to the embers And knows that shes got to stand tall But sadly her heart is jaded From malice this world has created Still she throws her head back And screams to the sky Thank God ive finally made it.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/5/2016 10:26:00 PM
A most enjoyable read...
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Date: 7/17/2016 3:53:00 PM
Such a moving rhyme Belle:-) welcome to Poetry soup:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/16/2016 12:25:00 AM
Belle, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/15/2016 1:06:00 AM
Belle, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I feel as if you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*
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Date: 7/14/2016 4:34:00 AM
Belle. Hope it's not about you... if it is, I'll pray for you.... linda
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Date: 7/14/2016 12:21:00 AM
A motivating poem Belle;)
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