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He had playful brown eyes, He was gentle, he was kind The diamond in the rough, I have always wanted to find He is divine He is the red that blazes across the summer sky Walking along the ocean shore There is no one I am missing more Our fingers entwined, My heart beating faster all the time Our feet sinking deep, into the sand I lay you down, and kiss you softly without a sound An echo in my ears, as my heart pounds Your lips, my desire Drink deep My cheeks burn as if they are on fire. Shivering, and shaking as you take my hand As your warm kisses linger at the nape of my neck Deeper in your pleasure I slowly drown

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Date: 6/17/2009 2:46:00 AM
First to comment! =) Incredible write with beautiful and vivid vocab and description to give the satisfactory towards the reader. I love the last stanza, how you summarized it all into one stanza in the end. Incredible. I shall read some more of your poetry Miss Hew. Wow.
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