Unknown

He had playful brown eyes,
He was gentle, he was kind
The diamond in the rough,
I have always wanted to find

He is divine

He is the red that blazes across the summer sky
Walking along the ocean shore
There is no one I am missing more
Our fingers entwined, 
My heart beating faster all the time
Our feet sinking deep, into the sand
I lay you down, and kiss you softly without a sound
An echo in my ears, as my heart pounds
Your lips, my desire
Drink deep

My cheeks burn as if they are on fire.
Shivering, and shaking as you take my hand
As your warm kisses linger at the nape of my neck
Deeper in your pleasure I slowly drown
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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June 17, 2009 at 2:46 AM
First to comment! =) Incredible write with beautiful and vivid vocab and description to give the satisfactory towards the reader. I love the last stanza, how you summarized it all into one stanza in the end. Incredible. I shall read some more of your poetry Miss Hew. Wow.
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