Unknowing Hearts
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The inspiration for this one came from the long relationship between two middle school students on the school bus I drive and my hope that they do not get to caught up in it so quick that they find themselves in trouble. They also remind me of Romeo and Juliet in some sense.
Wrapped in the passion of the moment
engulfed in a cascade of a emotion
carried by a gushing torrent of desire
dancing on the rapids of uncertainty
two unknowing hearts intertwined
in the rapture of blinding passion
rush toward forbidden waters.
In the midst of love's blissful chaos
will two unknowing hearts whirl
perilously over confusion's cliff
and plunge helplessly toward
the jagged rocks of ill-fated love,
or will two unknowing hearts
be found desperately clinging
to the last branch of innocents?
Copyright © Kim Morrison | Year Posted 2013
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