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The inspiration for this one came from the long relationship between two middle school students on the school bus I drive and my hope that they do not get to caught up in it so quick that they find themselves in trouble. They also remind me of Romeo and Juliet in some sense. 
 Wrapped in the passion of the moment
 engulfed in a cascade of a emotion 
 carried by a gushing torrent of desire
 dancing on the rapids of uncertainty
 two unknowing hearts intertwined 
 in the rapture of blinding passion
 rush toward forbidden waters.

 In the midst of love's blissful chaos
 will two unknowing hearts whirl 
 perilously over confusion's cliff 
 and plunge helplessly toward   
 the jagged rocks of ill-fated love,
 or will two unknowing hearts 
 be found desperately clinging
 to the last branch of innocents? 
      

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/19/2013 11:40:00 PM
Hello Kim, reading this deeply passionate poem....... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Goodnight poet friend <3 =LINDA
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Date: 5/19/2013 6:19:00 PM
two unknowing hearts intertwined in the rapture of blinding passion rush toward forbidden waters. a simply lovely poem full of feelings ty for sharing
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Kim Morrison
Date: 5/19/2013 6:56:00 PM
thank you Kim
Date: 5/10/2013 10:35:00 PM
Congratulations on this awesone write. Love how we are left to ponder what happens to these two hearts. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 5/10/2013 6:13:00 PM
Congrad's on your writing winning. Light & Love
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Date: 5/10/2013 12:41:00 PM
Congrats on your win.
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Kim Morrison
Date: 5/10/2013 4:22:00 PM
Thank You!
Date: 5/10/2013 7:01:00 AM
Congratulations on a well-deserved win with this write, Kim. :-)
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Kim Morrison
Date: 5/10/2013 4:22:00 PM
Thank You Delysia!
Date: 5/10/2013 3:50:00 AM
Congrats on your win. Rick
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Kim Morrison
Date: 5/10/2013 4:23:00 PM
Thank You Rick!
Date: 5/10/2013 12:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your #1 win. Thanks for sharing...... Lucilla
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Kim Morrison
Date: 5/10/2013 4:23:00 PM
Thank You!
Date: 5/9/2013 10:59:00 PM
Kim, thank you for impressing me with your awesome poem. Congrats ~SKAT~
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Kim Morrison
Date: 5/10/2013 4:29:00 PM
I am glad I impressed you SKAT and I thank you again for all the kind wonderful compliments you have written on many of my poems. I am working on another one right now, so I hope to impress you again.
Date: 5/5/2013 6:27:00 AM
Good morning Kim, i like the feeling of not knowing what one is walking into when it comes to love. The energy one uses through this so called blissful chaos. the cliff the plunger the fall. an excellent poem to read this beautiful Sunday Morning... always~ Linda
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Kim Morrison
Date: 5/5/2013 2:29:00 PM
Once again I thank you for the very lovely comment Linda. I have read some of your work as well and it is just stunning. However, I only had time to commebt on a few.