Unkept Secrets

i....gave my own soul
fallowed by my hart....
stretched so long... it continued

i a lender giving my hand... reached out
taking your troubles away...
in return.... a secret to be kept.

you... i my self trusted
not knowing what i sincerely troubled...
fear im laid.... about to become....
a night mare so to be.. opened to me

foreshadow don't... hide anymore...
worn me forevermore...
i.... to see another time of misfortune
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 17, 2010 at 1:05 PM
interesting write, enjoyed this one,..P.D.
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May 31, 2010 at 6:34 AM
This is excellent and expressive. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Great job! Joseph
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May 21, 2010 at 10:22 AM
I am enjoying reading poems here this morning at PoetrySoup. I am glad you shared your writing with us today Taetha. Have a wonderful weekend filled with love, good health and lots of inspiration. Love, Carol
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