Universe (Senryu)

Universe in silent overwhelming grandeur
Distant lights overflowing darkness with brilliance
Timeless evidence of lasting existence
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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George   Avatar
January 9, 2010 at 6:30 AM
Me again Gert, I see you are not set up for soup mail, so if you are interested, email memorelaine_publishinghouse @sympatico.com for information on how to place an order. Hope this helps, Love, Lainie
George   Avatar
January 9, 2010 at 6:22 AM
Welcome back Gert. Beautiful senryu! Thank you for sharing. Re: Roses and Thorns. I am still writing it and hope to have it finished in a few months. I will keep you posted. I do have a book of poetry 'Where the Heart Resides' that can be purchased through MemorElaine Publishing House. Check your soup mail for details. Love, Lainie
Sheart Avatar
January 8, 2010 at 2:08 PM
Love this Senryu Gert. Love the way you think. This brings back memories for me that go way back. Going into my favorites! Sending good thoughts your way. Hope your're all settled in your new place making some new friends there. Take care, thanks for your kind comments on my latest. Love Light Patty
Culverhouse Avatar
January 5, 2010 at 4:58 PM
Welcome back!! very beautiful poem here--lasting existence, yes yes!
Brown Avatar
January 5, 2010 at 11:06 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Gert. May your writing take you to new heights each and every day. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
January 5, 2010 at 5:12 AM
Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. I have missed your writes and comments in your absence. Sara
Kendrick Avatar
January 5, 2010 at 5:10 AM
Gert, on the left at the top where it says "My Poems" click on that. It will take you to your poems that has an edit column. Click on edit and you can go in and edit. Be sure to click on submit tab at the bottom like you did when you posted so that the change will happen. I would soup you to tell you this but you don't have a soup icon so I guess that you don't want soup mail. This is an excellent write. I think about it sometimes all that out there in orbit and things happening and no sound
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January 4, 2010 at 5:53 PM
enjoyed reading today, hope your new year is fabulous.
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