Brenda Chiri Poet Free verse

Universe Hugs

Visions of the sweet champagne 
moonlight shines down as the 
enchanting stars sparkle like diamonds 
A spectrum of ambient colors 
is held within each planet 
Yet it is the universe that gently 
hugs all these mysterious celestial 
bodies in our heavens,
mesmerizing us all


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Contest: a poem that did not receive a ribbon
Sponsor: Rick Parise



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Date:6/29/19
Contest: the Universe 
Sponsor:Nina Parmenter

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Elaine Perrin October 20, 2019 at 12:47 PM I love the idea of universe hugs :-) Beautiful imagery :-) x Brenda Chiri October 20, 2019 at 1:21 PM Elaine you are too sweet thank you!;)

Nick Trim July 12, 2019 at 7:22 PM I agree with what they've already said you seem to have an elite focus writing true hocus pocus tricks since your return, still scared to burn me it's your turn B, that's Brenda not beach, i'm a naughty boy a lesson you must teach Brenda Chiri July 13, 2019 at 1:07 AM Lmao! Well I guess I'm just gonna have to write and mash you then! Hahaha! Thank Nick appreciate your comments!;)

Gershon Wolf July 4, 2019 at 10:46 AM Yes, the universe is the container for all these wonderful spectacles. G.L. in the contest, Brenda. ~ gw Brenda Chiri July 4, 2019 at 11:32 AM Thank you so much Gershon! ;)

Eve Roper July 2, 2019 at 9:00 PM this is such a beautiful write with great imagery, Brenda, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve Brenda Chiri July 3, 2019 at 1:26 PM Eve thank you so very much! Your words and your visit are much appreciated!;)

Gordon Mcconnell July 2, 2019 at 3:19 PM Lovely penning Brenda, real great imagery indispersed throughout all your lines. Brenda Chiri July 3, 2019 at 1:25 PM Gordon why thank you so much! I hope all is well with you? ;)

Sandra Adams July 2, 2019 at 10:58 AM Beautifully written, the universe profound through your images....nicely penned! Good luck in the contest! Brenda Chiri July 3, 2019 at 1:25 PM Sandra thank you so very much!;)

John Fleming July 2, 2019 at 8:51 AM Your poetry has attained new heights, Poetess...you certainly are penning some really lovely stuff of late. In admiration. :) john P.s This is deserving of high marks. Brenda Chiri July 3, 2019 at 1:24 PM Thank you so much John! Your words are always appreciated and wanted! All my affection;)

Curtis Moorman July 2, 2019 at 7:20 AM And we all are mesmerized by your great poems. You have that 'touch'! Brenda Chiri July 3, 2019 at 1:23 PM Ahh Curtis that's so sweet thank you!;)

Kai Michael Neumann July 2, 2019 at 2:33 AM United we stand ... Nice one, Kai Brenda Chiri July 2, 2019 at 3:25 AM Thank you so very much! Appreciate your kind words!;)

Andrea Dietrich June 30, 2019 at 2:16 PM great job, Brenda. This is not an easy contest for me, but your entry just flows so smoothly, Brenda Chiri June 30, 2019 at 2:49 PM Thank you Andrea! I found it a bit challenging too. Well the trying to describe it in 10 lines had me really challenged but I hope I pulled it off! Andrea as good as you are im sure you will knock it out of the park!;) good luck!

Jan Allison June 30, 2019 at 3:14 AM Love it Brenda - maybe a universal hug will get my muse working again lol!:-) hugs Jan xx Brenda Chiri June 30, 2019 at 1:35 PM Ah Jan here is hug;) hope your muse will get to work for you!;)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 29, 2019 at 8:59 PM I LOVE the hug! I feel it. <3 Wonderful poem Brenda! Good luck in the contest, xomo! Brenda Chiri June 29, 2019 at 9:06 PM Thank you Mo! I really appreciate it!;)